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flash_indie

Fic: That Dreary Day in late February

Oct 18, 2006 17:57

Title: That Dreary Day in Late February
Rating: PG
Fandom: Bleach...Ichigo/Orihime

( The butterflies are back, stampeding through her belly like nothing she’s ever felt. Her heart is shivering, quaking in her chest, let me out it screams, let me free. )

the country inside my head, bleach

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flash_indie October 22 2006, 04:53:08 UTC

Thank you!

hidden_gems October 18 2006, 09:28:44 UTC

Aaawww... Not a fan of this pairing but I'm glad I read this anyway because it was incredibly sweet. I think you write Orihime very well.

flash_indie October 22 2006, 04:54:18 UTC

Thanks, Orihime is an incredibly difficult character to write, so I'm glad I'm managing to pull her off. ^^ And thanks for reading anyway, even though you're not a fan.

hidden_gems October 22 2006, 09:21:29 UTC

She's also incredibly hard to draw... But when we get her right she's damn amazing, isn't she? ^^

loveotter October 18 2006, 12:19:24 UTC

Not an Ichigo/Orihime fan but this was very nicely written!

flash_indie October 22 2006, 04:54:41 UTC

Thank you!

sesshoumara October 18 2006, 13:14:53 UTC

I love your story. The buildup was great but the end fell a little flat for me. He just went home? I was expecting him to jump up and hug her or something :P

flash_indie October 22 2006, 04:56:11 UTC

Thanks, I probably should have added that I was going to continue this, huh? I know the ending is a little...anti-climatic, but there is more of this fic. (Something I'm working on at the moment)

sesshoumara October 22 2006, 14:27:20 UTC

Wow, it's great to hear that there will be a sequel to your story. I'm looking forward to see what happens then. Keep up the good work ^^

alory_shannon February 11 2007, 19:51:29 UTC

I don't really like this pairing, but this was very well-written, sweet without being saccharine, and touching without being cliche.

And I thought the ending was perfect. Ichigo isn't the type to instantly fling himself at a girl. He still needs time to process this.

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yhaythar October 18 2006, 19:42:00 UTC

Eee. I enjoyed reading this. It was in-character, thoughtful, and sweet without being super gushy. (:

Very nice.

flash_indie October 22 2006, 04:56:34 UTC

Ahhh, thank you! Glad you enjoyed!