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Fic: That Dreary Day in late February

Oct 18, 2006 17:57

Title: That Dreary Day in Late February
Rating: PG
Fandom: Bleach...Ichigo/Orihime

( The butterflies are back, stampeding through her belly like nothing she’s ever felt. Her heart is shivering, quaking in her chest, let me out it screams, let me free. )

the country inside my head, bleach

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sesshoumara October 18 2006, 13:14:53 UTC

I love your story. The buildup was great but the end fell a little flat for me. He just went home? I was expecting him to jump up and hug her or something :P

flash_indie October 22 2006, 04:56:11 UTC

Thanks, I probably should have added that I was going to continue this, huh? I know the ending is a little...anti-climatic, but there is more of this fic. (Something I'm working on at the moment)

sesshoumara October 22 2006, 14:27:20 UTC

Wow, it's great to hear that there will be a sequel to your story. I'm looking forward to see what happens then. Keep up the good work ^^

alory_shannon February 11 2007, 19:51:29 UTC

I don't really like this pairing, but this was very well-written, sweet without being saccharine, and touching without being cliche.

And I thought the ending was perfect. Ichigo isn't the type to instantly fling himself at a girl. He still needs time to process this.

flash_indie February 11 2007, 22:01:10 UTC

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed. ^^

I agree, I've never really seen Ichigo as a...I dunno, particularly sexual-based person. He's still getting to the bit where he's interested in girls in that way, still naive, I guess.

Anyway, thanks again. ^^

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