we won't let those fuckers in
I've basically finished my Tom Conrad/Michael Guy Chislett fic, and idk. I'm kind of having issues with it in terms of pacing. I was wondering if anyone was interested in giving it a once-over for me? Just letting me know if it flows properly and that it isn't too stilted or awkward in places. I haven't written these bandom boys before either, so I hope that the voices are alright. It's about 6,500 words.