fic: hana kimi, rui xi/xiu yi, pg.

[fivil]

I'm so excited about the Japanese drama version, I improv'ed some Hua Yang fic. :D

going out, being in
hua yang shao nian shao nu (hana kimi twdrama), xiu yi/rui xi (implied rui xi/quan), pg, ~850 words, for happiestwhen who asked for the pairing and first dates, attempted kisses, bad pop music and Senior Nan, all who appear in this fic. I don't own Hana Kimi

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[happiestwhen]

YAAAAAAY. I didn't know you remembered this! SUCH A SURPRISE. THIS WAS SO CUTE!! Wasn't I supposed to write you something in return? lf;skdja;lj

“No,” Rui Xi said.

“Yes,” Xiu Yi said at the same time. Rui Xi hit his arm.

wee. :(( You write Xiu Yi so well. Everything he does is so like, manga-esque and theatrical in this. I could totally see it all playing out in an episode. (WHY DIDN'T THEY HAVE A DATE EPISODE??? Oh... right... the whole... oh. Alas.) He's so great and awkward. "Is there something wrong with the popcorn" and Rui Xi being all preoccupied with thoughts of Quan the whole time. So sad, so good. And I love the last two lines!! Poor Xiu Yi and his gayngst. :( ♥♥

(Ok, so in my head, Senior Nan was secretly stalking them on their date and followed them into that movie, right? Right? >.> OT3?)

[fivil]

No, it was the birthday ficlets thing. Nothing in return required.

Yeah, Senior Nan stalked them and then chatted up a random chick to go to the theater. I mean, such a smooth operator would NOT take a girl to a lesbian movie had it not been spontane. Otherwise the girl might get some ideas or something.

Gayngst. <333

[strawberryjoy]

There really ought to be a date episode in series 2. It would be a tragically wasted opportunity otherwise!

[phasera]

XD XD XD XD gayngst.

oh man, i am SO stealing that word for my everyday vocabulary.

[strawberryjoy]

Very cute! And very Xiu Yi as well, somehow keeping his hopes up and making a positive out of everything right until the moment the door closes.

[fivil]

Aww, thank you.

[danbi]

DA SHOU!!!!! Sorry, got excited about his mention.

This was cute!

[fivil]

Of course he gets a mention :D

[phasera]

D: you tricked me into thinking this would be cute xiu yi/rui xi, TRICKED. it doesn't count if she's thinking about quan the whole time and he doesn't even get to steal a goodnight smooch. ;~~~~~~; xiu yi~~! G-Y-A GAY OK???

[fivil]

I'm sorrryyy. I'm too hung up on canon, I couldn't *not* make it Quan/Rui Xi. He was too wrapped up in his gayngst to even try to kiss her. :(

alternative ending

[fivil]

“Thank you, Xiu Yi,” Rui Xi said. “This was fun.”

It had been fun, despite the fact that Xiu Yi had kept trying to court her, and the fact they'd paid movie tickets to nap for 2 hours. Xiu Yi had made it fun. She was always comfortable with him - even when he tried to convince her of their magical love fate, she knew he wouldn't actually ever go beyond hugging her.

He smiled at her and she smiled back, knowing she shouldn't give him ideas because things were bad enough as it was, knowing she shouldn't give him hope. But she looked up at him and his eyes almost shone with love and then she didn't think and just.

Just as friends. But she didn't say it, standing tiptoe and planting a light kiss on his cheek.

She opened the door behind her and went in, leaving him standing holding his cheek as if he'd been slapped.

It hadn't been her smartest move but she wasn't very smart to begin with.

Re: alternative ending

[phasera]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. ♥ *MELTED DEAD*

^_____^ ilu.

[chuffing]

a;lkfdlakdlf congratulations! This is the first fic I've made it through to the end in over 2 years! :)

On a more serious note, that was adorable and wee and I loved it. Poor Xiu Yi. :( Even though I'm a big{ger} Rui Xi/Quan shipper, I really feel for him. He's so earnest. Man, I love this show more than anyone really should.

[fivil]

He's just adorable. He's the awesomest third wheel ever. <3 I don't really ship Rui Xi/Xiu Yi, but I fully support Xiu Yi's gyaness. I just want him to be happy. :(

This is the first fic I've made it through to the end in over 2 years! :)
OMG huge compliment. If you at all care to read what I previously wrote in the same fandom: http://fivil.livejournal.com/313719.html (naturally not obligating you to read it in any way)

[chuffing]

I am apparently all over your journal right now.

He really is. I think everyone should support his gayness. It's beautiful, like a single, naive snowflake. Of gay.

I was looking for that the other day! I bookmarked it to read and them must have deleted the bookmark on accident. This will give me something to read tomorrow night. Yay!

[fivil]

I have this philosophical dilemma of whether it was Xiu Yi that attracted me to Jiro or Jiro that attracted me to Xiu Yi. Life's great mysteries. :(

This just made me realize how much Toma has to live up to. Poor dude.