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fivil

h/d badfic.

Aug 11, 2005 22:31

I wrote some badfic so maybe I could get some reasonably good fic out of my system sometime this week. Meaning I lazily wrote the worst fic I could just so that the next time I sit down and write something, it's not this bad ( Read more... )

fic: harry potter, harry potter, fic

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bloodybrilliant August 11 2005, 20:45:13 UTC

Oh dear Sanni. You do badfic too well! I am shaken! Shaken to the core! And laughing quite a bit.

Of the whole fic, some of the things I liked best are these:

The Author Notes. Without them, we'd have no idea what was going on!

The song lyrics. Is that a real song? Or bad lyrics you made up? *meeep* either way. j

The eating disorder.

Harry, the Cure-All. Because he's HARRY!

Love!

The Dark Lord's punishments and punishing practices. His points, yes. Voldemort's punishments were very evil and cruel because he was always trying to make a point with his punishments. Usually the point was that he was cruel and evil. Draco had learned this point but he still didn't like it. He cried onto his wet clothes, cried until he fell asleep on the cold floor.

Oh teh angst!!!! *slashes wrists*

Oh teh love!!! *HEALS*

Yes. I ♥ this story. You are so versatile!
Oh, Sanni! I love you!!!
*is healed*

bloodybrilliant August 11 2005, 20:47:34 UTC

Also, the title. I nearly forgot. It is perfect!

So THAT is where my true love is! LOVE! now I know.

fivil August 11 2005, 20:49:14 UTC

Yeah, I'm kind of geographical like that. I like to point people to correct diarections! XD!

bloodybrilliant August 11 2005, 20:56:01 UTC

I love geographical love! And directional love as well! OTP!

fivil August 11 2005, 20:48:36 UTC

No, it's not Harry that cures it, it's their twu wuv!!! You totally misinterpreted my fic! :0

But that's okay. I was trying to convey the deep, heartfelt emotions that run to the core of their very being because they are so truely in love. That was (IMO) the message of this fic though it SO has other messages because I'm such a subtle writer and tend to have multiple messages in my stories! OMG!

And the song is the TEENANGST!!! song of the century, "Crawling" by Linkin Park. Geez, Jez, where did you spend your teenangst years?!

bloodybrilliant August 11 2005, 20:55:30 UTC

Oh noes! But without Harry, there would BE no twu wuv, right?? So, Harry certainly IS a part of the cure! ^_^

Yes, I completely see your heartfelt emotions. But they are subtle, I will say that. The subtlety is so subtle, I had to re-read it 12 times to catch it. And I still did not SEE it: I FELT it. ^_^ So lovely! You are the subtlety master!

I fail! LINKIN PARK!? The ANGST-ASITY of all teenangstness!! Oh, how could I not recognize their brilliance?!?!

(A/N: Oh dear! Well, "Linkin Park" was after my teenangst years. I was no longer angsted when they came about. I'd say my teenangst years were spent with NIN, Tori Amos, The Smiths and The Cure. *cough* For reals.
(Psst! I've only heard one Linkin Park song, that I KNEW was Linkin Park. I could not recognize it now! Which I think is a good thing. ;P )

fivil August 11 2005, 20:59:04 UTC

Dude, you listened to GOOD bands when teen angsting?! That sucks.

I'm so glad I was teen in the age of Limp Bizkit and Linkin Park!!!!1

bloodybrilliant August 11 2005, 22:01:25 UTC

And there was a good bit of Rage Against the Machine, Nirvana, er...some others? Dinosaur Jr., Samiam too.

Yep. Frankly, I'm quite glad to have had GOOD bands to teenangst to. ;P I mean, a band named after a flaccid erection? >.< EW!

fivil August 11 2005, 22:08:34 UTC

Limp Bizkit was fun to hate because everyone who listened to them was basically a retard. XD!

bloodybrilliant August 12 2005, 05:37:29 UTC

THis is true. Fred singer-person is basically truly retarded, so there you go. What an ass!

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