*pokes fic with stick* it needs a beta...
So I wrote another comment fic, this time for eruthros's prompt of Teyla/Janet kissing.
I have no idea if this ficlet is any good. I sorta know what I was trying to do, but I have absolutely no idea if I succeeded. Which worries me, because usually I can tell at least a little bit, which leads me to think that I more likely failed than succeeded. But I kinda like the premise that went on in my head to let Teyla and Janet kiss and think it could make a good little fic eventually. So, would anyone be willing to beta (or 'beat into shape', whichever) this ficlet? (Doesn't have to be right now, if you'd have free time later on.)
Sorry for the spamming of the flist that I've been doing this weekend.
I have no idea if this ficlet is any good. I sorta know what I was trying to do, but I have absolutely no idea if I succeeded. Which worries me, because usually I can tell at least a little bit, which leads me to think that I more likely failed than succeeded. But I kinda like the premise that went on in my head to let Teyla and Janet kiss and think it could make a good little fic eventually. So, would anyone be willing to beta (or 'beat into shape', whichever) this ficlet? (Doesn't have to be right now, if you'd have free time later on.)
Sorry for the spamming of the flist that I've been doing this weekend.