I fail at comment-fic (Richard Woolsey/Ronon Dex, SGA)

Jan 11, 2009 00:39

So there's the kissathon at thingswithwings's journal, right? And she's invited others to play with the prompts, and honestly, it sounded much more fun than my chores. So I thought to myself, why not? Umm, evidently this is why not. It's something like a thousand words from a tight-third POV on Richard Woolsey, mostly angsty with a kiss at the end, written in a style that is either horrible or really slick, and somehow some Laura Cadman/Richard Woolsey friendship snuck in. I am, frankly, confused. But I think pleased with it. ETA: *facepalm of fail* Aside from the fact I taught my spell-checker "Woosley" instead of "Woolsey".

As usual, any and all feedback is welcomed.

Link to the thing on thingswithwings's journal (The prompt was Richard/Ronon by toft-froggy)

I think I might go try to write an actually short and actually happy kissing fic now. We'll see how well that goes. ETA2: Well, I did 'short' but failed at 'happy'. Methinks my brain might be in angst mode right now.

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