Deleted Scenes: The One Where it All Began, Part 1

[finchburg]

Title Deleted Scenes: The One Where it All Began, Part 1
Status WIP, check the story index for more scenes.
Summary You never forget your first trip to Diagon Alley.
Disclaimer I owe it all to JKR.

Comments

[finchburg]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I did just do some tweaking, so you might want to reread it.

I made Draco a little brattier and switched up the ending. When I was writing before I thought it would be best for him to not learn her name right away, but then I realized it would make part 2 a little awkward.

I changed the ending and its a little fluffy but that's okay, this first scene is total fluff on principle. I'll save the angst for the scenes that happen in books 5 and 6 haha

[siriusly4draco]

Beautifully written. You did a wonderdful job on this chapter. The detail, character dialogue and interaction was perfect. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

[finchburg]

Thank you for your feedback :)

Description kinda tricky for me because I get bored with fics that just ramble on and on about the scenery or their inner turmoil. I'm such a picky reader, lol.

BTW, your icon is made of all kinds of awesome. I love it.

[moonjameskitten]

Absolutely LOVELY ! I'm going right to the next chapter !
It is so original and nice to see them starting 'something' without the prejudices set by the 'Houses' differences...*sigh*

[finchburg]

Thank you! I know what you mean, the whole "what if?!?!?" senario that makes every shipper daydream.

I was worried about this part ending up too fluffy, but it looks like I did okay ;)

[moonjameskitten]

Oooh! seems to me totally OK! :)
And, would you mind I friend you ?

[finchburg]

I don't mind at all :)

[kazfeist]

Good thing I am going through your list from the beginning! Glad I caught this! :D

[toastercook]

I love this!