i know probably nobody cares but i just have to rant about fanfiction for a sec. i'm really starting to get pissed off by stock phrases such as "his eyes darkened impossibly" - i know some people (::cough:: ni ::cough::) think your pupils widen when you're aroused, but that makes no sense to me. pupils widen when it's dark in order to take in more
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