FIC FOR TOKERUYOUNA

Mar 23, 2010 18:33

For: tokeruyouna
From: koneho

Title: The Tides
Pairings/Characters: Ueda Tatsuya w/ Akanishi Jin
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Jin's as offensive here as he is in real life. Okay, maybe slightly less.
Notes: Inspired by a single moment in the “Break the Records” documentary when Ueda mentions plotting something with Koki to try and make Jin happy.
Summary: Jin is like ( Read more... )

year: 2010, p: jin/ueda, rated: pg-13

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tokeruyouna March 23 2010, 20:57:00 UTC
They had sung it together once, just the two of them onstage, in sunglasses and bad costumes and with guitars barely anchoring their dreams to earth.
My favorite JinDa moment.

“Ah,” he suddenly says in the silence, “I forgot to tell him again.”

I love you.
I especially liked the I missed you/I miss you part and then this.

Thank you so much!

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tokeruyouna March 26 2010, 19:17:34 UTC
i know that this isn't quite what you wanted, and for that i apologize. i do plan on writing you something properly when i find the right inspiration. but i hope this will tide you over until then, and i'm glad you liked this nonetheless.

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sashjun March 23 2010, 22:12:04 UTC
*____* This was really really beautiful!

I like how you describe their dynamics and how Ueda watches over Jin, still he slips away or he lets him, but at the end Jin is still there for him, even as all stays unspoken.

Also in general I like the atmosphere of the whole work.

and yeah the Oh, I forgot to tell him again idea was great! It also kind of suggested that Ueda thinks he has plenty of time, that Jin will be there

so yeah basically <3

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sashjun March 26 2010, 19:19:30 UTC
atmosphere! i'm glad you liked it. i was aiming for something a little bit desaturated tbh, and this comment lets me know it kinda worked. so that makes me glad.

i think ueda putting it off is one of those things that make it a little bit uncertain. :)

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lineelu2001 March 24 2010, 00:10:23 UTC
Jindaaaaaaaa~~~~~~

;-; Thank you so much for the fic. Thank you, thank you, thank you!

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lineelu2001 March 26 2010, 19:20:14 UTC
i love them! and i'm glad you liked it~

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fionnakreuz March 24 2010, 03:01:02 UTC
Oh my god. I'm crying here. Like seriously. I can't see my fucking my keyboard and it's wet and shit I hope this thing won't fuse up or sth.

Oh my god I love you. You nailed Jin. Fuck. This is creepy and just about the most amazing thing I ever read ever and... tears wouldn't just stop. Dammit.

I could blame my hormones for crying like a bullied kid here but christ, you just nailed all my fears and frustration for Jin, you made me hope and believe in Jin again. Just, I swear I make more sense in a normal scenario but now just let me flail incoherently.

And your Ueda. Fucking, Your Ueda. Also in real life, I don't swear this much but god, your Ueda. YOUR UEDA IS JUST ABOUT THE MOST BEAUTIFUL THING IN THE WORLD.

I am seriously not making any sense anymore and possibly scaring you but omg. I love you. ):

Have my babies.

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fionnakreuz March 24 2010, 03:35:33 UTC
Jin, a little bit older, a little bit wiser, a little bit rougher, a little bit stronger. Jin, forging ahead to fulfill each dream-going to America, international fame, that little slice of family and home-one by one by one. Jin, with his dark hair grown long and his hat covering his eyes, hiding his smile like a secret he's only willing to give to a few, precious people. Jin, completely unlike the flailing, screaming youth he used to be, but still laughing that laugh that could make anyone fall in love.

STILL CRYING

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fairy_chimes March 24 2010, 04:58:58 UTC
This is absolutely gorgeous. *_*

Jin, completely unlike the flailing, screaming youth he used to be, but still laughing that laugh that could make anyone fall in love.
So very true. ♥

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