FIC FOR KYJR

Mar 23, 2013 23:44

For: kyjr
From: ayame_hadouken

Title: Change of Air
Pairings/Characters: Nakamaru Yuichi, Ueda Tatsuya
Rating: PG
Warnings: none
Notes: Hopefully this is something you’ll enjoy, kyjr. Thanks to K, S, and R for cheer-leading and beta-ing.
Summary: Nakamaru is ready for just a tiny bit of change.

It’s the hot part of spring and Nakamaru can barely fight how frizzy his hair gets. )

rated: pg, year: 2013, p: nakamaru/ueda

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kyjr March 24 2013, 00:57:15 UTC
OMFG IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE IT'S HERE

/squeals/

NAKAMARU'S FRIZZY HAIR omfg <3
wailing at taguchi taking him skydiving. of COURSE.

amazing appearing ueda. WHO CALLS HIM YUUICHI. and waltzes into his apartment and takes over his television and his computer and nakamaru just lets him because he's ueda. squeal.

i kind of love that ueda is the one to do all the planning and everything. normally it's all on nakamaru cause ueda's... ueda. but i love love love this <3
omfg he forgets about the trip ahaha akdnglbdhd
The last thing Nakamaru sees before Ueda adjusts his mask for him is his impish smile, and he can’t help returning it. He settles back in his seat, relaxing enough to doze off. oh warm fuzzies adglfndlhsxgb <333

he TAKES THE SEAT OUT FOR UEDA SJDNLGSKN such a gentleman.

Ueda tugs at Nakamaru, urging him to lean down. “I’ve got something to tell you,” he says. SCREAMS this was so cute omfg

/takes deep breath/ i love all of this ALL OF IT look at it all <33333333 thank youuuuu so so so so so much <3

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ayame_hadouken April 2 2013, 14:48:41 UTC
oh man, i'm so glad you enjoyed it; honestly i was like "how do i not be completely filthy??"

but yes, you're welcome. X3 it was fun to write.

again, i'm so glad you liked it, if the capslock was any indication. thank you <3<3<3<3<3<3<3

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sekky_chan March 24 2013, 11:51:12 UTC
I really love it, author-anon :P You make the fluff and narrative so very natural, just like how Maru and Ueda are irl. I love how Maru is completely at ease with Ueda sauntering into his personal space and decides stuff for him, including making him pay for meals, lol (I suppose the romantic setup dinner would also be paid by Maru). They're so familiar with each other that the ~UST~ is easy-going and the transition of their relationship is not out-of-place, but feels natural.

Yes yes, I love it. Your fluff makes me happy ♥ *omnious winks*

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ayame_hadouken April 2 2013, 14:50:43 UTC
i'm glad that i was able to fluff, though that sounds kind of awkward now that i've said it. hmmm

thank you, though i am wary of your winking :T

<3<3<3<3<3

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ayame_hadouken April 2 2013, 14:54:03 UTC
thank you very much for such a lovely comment <3<3<3<3

i'm glad you enjoyed it :3

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lwootz March 30 2013, 14:51:50 UTC
Omg! This is the cutest Maruda fic with all the fluffy trappings that are totally a guilty pleasure of mine. I must’ve said “Awwww~~” like a nearly 50 times when reading this.

I’m also kinda crazy about your Nakamaru and I pretty much fell for him right from the first sentence

Winter is finally over, and it has been for some time now, because it’s the hot part of spring and Nakamaru can barely fight how frizzy his hair gets.

That’s just adorable lol

Skydiving-- honestly, what had even made Taguchi think that that had been anywhere on his list of things to do, ever?

Perfect hahaha. I loved when Nakamaru told that anecdote and it’s hilarious to think he’s still a bit traumatized from the experience of vacations with Taguchi.

“Yuichi,” Ueda says in greeting, kicking off his shoes and making his way to commandeer the softer half of Nakamaru’s couch.

This is so Ueda. No argument. <3<3<3 ( ... )

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ayame_hadouken April 2 2013, 15:07:48 UTC
man, i think i kind of surprised myself with the cute and fluffy X3

i bet that the skydiving story is going to be one of those stories that they just keep talking about, joining such classics as the legend of the cream fight and jay-g and the cake.

thank you, though, especially in regards to description. sometimes i forget that i can make nice words, you know

<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

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sashjun March 30 2013, 17:36:35 UTC
This was a sweet read. The way Ueda became the one organizing Nakamaru's life there for a moment, clearly with a purpose in mind was great and I just enjoyed the super fluffy feel of it all. ♥

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ayame_hadouken April 2 2013, 15:11:03 UTC
thank you very much :D <3<3<3<3<3

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