Challenge 80 (Yet again!)
Can you tell I was waiting for the Remainders Challenge? ;-)
Fandom: CSI (Las Vegas)
Pairing: Sara/Catherine
Challenge: 27 -- Homesickness
Word Count: 242
Rating: R
Title: ( Two Hours and Seventy Five Miles )
Fandom: CSI (Las Vegas)
Pairing: Sara/Catherine
Challenge: 27 -- Homesickness
Word Count: 242
Rating: R
Title: ( Two Hours and Seventy Five Miles )
Something like that."
i remember that line from that one CSI.. {descriptive right? lol} but seriously i was wondering how they got lost when tahoes have navigation systems in them. and i can even see catherines evil smile as she walkes past the trooper
"Now Sara watches Catherine, who gets her nails done every two weeks and still pays attention to fashion trends, and she wonders what it’s like to kiss the cool girls."
"Some guy yelled ‘nice wife-beater’ at her on the way to science class, and she’d decked him right in the hallway. Bloody knuckles and a suspension, but all she was upset about was missing chemistry."
i love those lines they are sooo funny! i can totally see a young sara decking some jack-ass
jock because he said that!
"If it were Greg, or maybe even Nick, she’s sure they’d give up their front teeth for the privilege."
and i can just SEE greg standing there wide eyed and drooling if sara asked him to "watch".. it would be a kodak moment!!:)
ok so theres what i had to say! sorry it took so much space, but you are such a great writer and i couldn't help myself!! so anyway, GREAT stuff!
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When I heard that line (state trooper), I had to write it down, it was just *too* perfect! :-D
Re: Sara decking that guy: Exactly. She strikes me as scrappy. :-)
Re: Drooling Greg. Oh, gosh, yes. His jaw would just *drop*. (Catherine, on the other hand, would probably not be thrilled about it. I get the feeling she has, like, *zero* patience for Greg. ;-)
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