Comments | femslash100: Challenges 68, 64, 63, 62, & 61.

amazon_syren in femslash100

Challenges 68, 64, 63, 62, & 61.

Jun 03, 2006 17:52

[Edit: I seem to be having some trouble with the tag-system...]

Fandom: Discworld (MR)
Pairing: Lofty/Tonker
Challenge: 61: Night
Rating: G
Word Count: 100
Title: ( Freedom )

author: amazon_syren, challenge64, challenge63, fandom: discworld, challenge61, challenge68, challenge70, challenge62

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ilthit June 5 2006, 10:30:34 UTC

Okay, since I have *glances* 20 minutes and I got everything else done, a round of C&C. I just broke my caffeine fast to get my brain in gear, so this is actually possible. Mmmm caffeine and sugar.Freedom: Really like the episode of Lofty looking at the match, seeing it as female and alive. Or perhaps she's using "she" as the general pronoun for every person ungendered as well as female ( ... )

amazon_syren June 5 2006, 12:35:34 UTC

Caffeine and sugar... and milk! Gotta have the milk! :-)

Re: Tag-system:
1) Didn't know about the shift-key. Excellent.
2) The problem (possibly due to my writing them all in, instead of doing the shift-key thing) is that (I got the challenge numbers wrong the first time I posted them and) when I went to fix the challenge-numbers, rather than getting rid of the original tags, it just added to them (Despite my deleting the contents of the field first).
So that's my trouble. :-)

Re: Comments: Wow! That was awesome! :-D

Re: Lofty and the fire-is-female: Yes, for Lofty, fire (because she loves it so, because it's so charming and alluring and beautiful and attractive) must be female ( ... )

ilthit June 5 2006, 12:59:19 UTC

No milk. I don't drink coffee; just the caffeine. :D And milk would not go with my energy drink ( ... )

amazon_syren June 5 2006, 13:45:22 UTC

Anna wasn't surprised to find people bathing -- and it's a communal bathing room, so people using it (depending on the hour, at any rate) would have to deal with having multiple people in room with them.
Anna was surprised at finding two people sharing one tub (particularly two people of different (haha) sexes, sitting so very close together).
She'd heard the noises about an hour earlier (10am). Now it's about 11am and the couple, whoever-they-are, seems to have run out of energy.

Except that they haven't, they've just moved things to a different location.

Uh...

That's why Polly was blushing, you see. It wasn't just that a stranger had seen her naked (because, really, there wasn't that much to see of either of them above the soap), it was because she'd been giving Mal a good scrub (wink, nudge) under the water while Mal was washing Polly's hair. Which probably wasn't that obvious, come to think of it. ;-)

ilthit June 5 2006, 18:30:01 UTC

I've read it again with more care and I realise that she'd heard it before and now was a later date, but read in a hurry the first impression is of teleportation. Ah well.

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