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Challenge #443: Moment

Jan 29, 2015 21:56

Title: Pretend That I Didn't
Author: Temari778
Fandom: Disney
Pairing: Elsa/Anna
Rating: G
Word Count: 250
Prompt: #443: Moment

( The ice castle stood )

author: temari778, fandom: disney, challenge443

Comments 3

killing_kurare February 2 2015, 09:01:01 UTC

That's a great moment you picked here ... very solemn somehow, looking at the ice castle, watching how it slowly melts away ...
Well done!

temari778 February 2 2015, 22:22:39 UTC

Thank you. Solemn is what I was going for. Looks like I succeeded. :)

swan_secrets February 6 2015, 23:58:28 UTC

Such a poignant piece, very well written.