ILU. these are so wonderful, heartbreaking but so beautifully descriptive. i love all of them but the first is myfavourite because its just john and imagining him writing those things and just ..yeah loved these, luv u. you totally made me cry, dude *searches for tissues*
Thank you so much. That means a lot. The first one is my favourite too actually. I can so easily see John writing this in the journal and then Dean reading his words, trying to connect with his dead father.
I should say sorry I made you cry but since that was what I was going for, I won't. lol
Thank you so much, sweetie. I'm glad you like them. *smooch*
I actually wrote a different one first for you but I wasn't sure about it so I wrote another. Anyway, here's the first one:
When you were small, maybe three years old, you fell off a swing and dislocated your shoulder. You got up and stared at me, arm dangling by your side. I ran to you and fell to my knees, hugging you, just like now. The pain finally hit and you started to shake, sucking in gulps of air, tears soaking my t-shirt. You cried and I held you as tight as I could while Jimmy down the road ran to get his mom. I told you it would all be alright. Don’t cry, Sammy. Don’t cry.
Thoughts run through his mind in that moment, so many and so fast that he can't seperate one from another and the whole time, his heart's just bleeding as he clutches Sam closer, curling his fingers in sweat-damp strands as sound fades away and there's just that little boy smell and the feel of a tiny hand held within his own for a fraction of an instant.
Suitably chastised by your meta post, I read the drabbles. I sometimes can't be bothered or find the motivation to read drabbles, seeing as there are novel-size stories waiting for me to finish, but once I do I usually like them
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Yes, it is harder work, both reading and writing a drabble. You can easily write 100 words as a part of a longer story but to write a hundred words that are the story is quite different.
Well, I always knew I wouldn't be able to say what I wanted with only 100 words when it came to that one so it was from the start meant to be 200. Don't really think it would have made the same impact if I'd cut it down half. Glad you liked it though.
The second one was so perfect... just *his* thoughts in that moment. It hurt so much reading it... how can you do that in just a few words? *is in awe but hates you a little...*
Thank you so much, baby. I had a different one written for that at first *points at comment above* but this one was more persistent, demanding to be written.
I'm glad the feelings came through and felt real. I just tried to put myself in his head and let the words come without thinking. I might have hitched my breath a little. lol
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I should say sorry I made you cry but since that was what I was going for, I won't. lol
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I'm so glad you liked it, honey. I was really pleased with how it turned out so I'm very happy you're happy with it.
*snuggles*
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Thank you for sharing.
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I actually wrote a different one first for you but I wasn't sure about it so I wrote another. Anyway, here's the first one:
When you were small, maybe three years old, you fell off a swing and dislocated your shoulder. You got up and stared at me, arm dangling by your side. I ran to you and fell to my knees, hugging you, just like now. The pain finally hit and you started to shake, sucking in gulps of air, tears soaking my t-shirt. You cried and I held you as tight as I could while Jimmy down the road ran to get his mom. I told you it would all be alright. Don’t cry, Sammy. Don’t cry.
I wish you’d cry.
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Thank you! And here's a tiny one for you:
Thoughts run through his mind in that moment, so many and so fast that he can't seperate one from another and the whole time, his heart's just bleeding as he clutches Sam closer, curling his fingers in sweat-damp strands as sound fades away and there's just that little boy smell and the feel of a tiny hand held within his own for a fraction of an instant.
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Honey, that one is just brilliant! Absolutely gorgeous! Much better than mine. Go post it in your journal, woman! Great things must be shared.
*loves you*
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Yes, it is harder work, both reading and writing a drabble. You can easily write 100 words as a part of a longer story but to write a hundred words that are the story is quite different.
Well, I always knew I wouldn't be able to say what I wanted with only 100 words when it came to that one so it was from the start meant to be 200. Don't really think it would have made the same impact if I'd cut it down half. Glad you liked it though.
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Beautiful hurty set my dear Felis :) *hugs*
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I'm glad the feelings came through and felt real. I just tried to put myself in his head and let the words come without thinking. I might have hitched my breath a little. lol
*hugs back*
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