Thank you so much, sweetie. I'm glad you like them. *smooch*
I actually wrote a different one first for you but I wasn't sure about it so I wrote another. Anyway, here's the first one:
When you were small, maybe three years old, you fell off a swing and dislocated your shoulder. You got up and stared at me, arm dangling by your side. I ran to you and fell to my knees, hugging you, just like now. The pain finally hit and you started to shake, sucking in gulps of air, tears soaking my t-shirt. You cried and I held you as tight as I could while Jimmy down the road ran to get his mom. I told you it would all be alright. Don’t cry, Sammy. Don’t cry.
Thoughts run through his mind in that moment, so many and so fast that he can't seperate one from another and the whole time, his heart's just bleeding as he clutches Sam closer, curling his fingers in sweat-damp strands as sound fades away and there's just that little boy smell and the feel of a tiny hand held within his own for a fraction of an instant.
Thank you for sharing.
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I actually wrote a different one first for you but I wasn't sure about it so I wrote another. Anyway, here's the first one:
When you were small, maybe three years old, you fell off a swing and dislocated your shoulder. You got up and stared at me, arm dangling by your side. I ran to you and fell to my knees, hugging you, just like now. The pain finally hit and you started to shake, sucking in gulps of air, tears soaking my t-shirt. You cried and I held you as tight as I could while Jimmy down the road ran to get his mom. I told you it would all be alright. Don’t cry, Sammy. Don’t cry.
I wish you’d cry.
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Thank you! And here's a tiny one for you:
Thoughts run through his mind in that moment, so many and so fast that he can't seperate one from another and the whole time, his heart's just bleeding as he clutches Sam closer, curling his fingers in sweat-damp strands as sound fades away and there's just that little boy smell and the feel of a tiny hand held within his own for a fraction of an instant.
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Honey, that one is just brilliant! Absolutely gorgeous! Much better than mine. Go post it in your journal, woman! Great things must be shared.
*loves you*
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But LOL, it ain't even 100 words!
*giggles*
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Hell, I'm sure you can find... *counts* 32 more and still keep the awesomeness. lol
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*g*
I can't believe I wrote Dean.
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