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Fic- Whatever it takes 21

Jul 15, 2011 22:49

Title- Whatever it takes 21
Author- Faythbrady
Ship/Series- Heroes. Sylar/Claire
Rating- YA
Disclaimer- I do not own heroes, only villains :D
Summary- It's time for the bachelor/bachelorette party. Will Sylar convince Claire to ride the tunnel of love? Will Peter win a stuffed duck? Is bringing ex-carnies to a funfair a good idea and does the Ferris ( Read more... )

fanfic, heroes, sylar/claire

Comments 12

cazcatharsis July 15 2011, 23:12:07 UTC

*fistpump* YES!

unseelie_lady July 16 2011, 01:20:23 UTC

*FLAIL* GaH!!!!!! *FANGIRL SQUEE*

okay, i've had time to form real words now. Holy cow, yay! i love this story!

revdorothyl July 16 2011, 02:10:22 UTC

I absolutely adored Sylar's 'geek-off' with Peter in the first part of this chapter (and I absolutely agree that "Jar Jar Binks" should be the definitive anti-"Star Wars is better than..." argument). And Sylar a Trekker? Yes, yes, YES! :)

But nothing can top the sheer joy and squeeing and 'Is it hot in here, or is it just me?' effect of Claire and Sylar acting like teenaged sweethearts at the fair and getting 'trapped' on the ferris wheel because Sylar's automatic response to the danger of their heavy make-out session being interrupted was to flash-fry the machinery!

[BTW, in case you get a chance to proof-read a bit more, you might want to re-check the 'Star Wars' part, because there were references to the good guys trying to stop or put an end to the Rebel Alliance -- which was the side Luke and Leia and even Han were at least nominally on -- and trying to save the Empire -- as opposed to overthrowing the evil empire and restoring or reinstituting the more democratic republic form of government. Or was that intentional, ( ... )

spaceanjl July 16 2011, 07:32:44 UTC

I can't even begin to express my joy at the the levels of geeky goodness at the beginning of this, and the sheer cute of the end.

(I can imagine them all skirting round the 'Verse love though, what with the blue hands and the Academy. Bit too close for comfort.)

But Sylar makes the cutest psycho-boyfriend out there. He's adorable when he's all bewildered and possessive.

whatever it takes bycuriosity July 16 2011, 17:31:27 UTC

First of all: Thank you for updating...I thought you might have lost interest in this great story! So I´m really greatfull you´re still on it. This one was great! Finally you gave us something to heavenly sigh about...Thanks! But don´t you dare let us hanging in midair! So pleeease go ahead and don´t let us wait for too long...
I´m no native english-speaker so sorry for all mistakes!
I´m really looking forward to the next (and next...)part of this great story. Thank you very much for sharing!
Liebe Grüße Peg