Fic- Whatever it takes 21

[faythbrady]

Title- Whatever it takes 21
Author- Faythbrady
Ship/Series- Heroes. Sylar/Claire
Rating- YA
Disclaimer- I do not own heroes, only villains :D
Summary- It's time for the bachelor/bachelorette party. Will Sylar convince Claire to ride the tunnel of love? Will Peter win a stuffed duck? Is bringing ex-carnies to a funfair a good idea and does the Ferris

Comments

[revdorothyl]

I absolutely adored Sylar's 'geek-off' with Peter in the first part of this chapter (and I absolutely agree that "Jar Jar Binks" should be the definitive anti-"Star Wars is better than..." argument). And Sylar a Trekker? Yes, yes, YES! :)

But nothing can top the sheer joy and squeeing and 'Is it hot in here, or is it just me?' effect of Claire and Sylar acting like teenaged sweethearts at the fair and getting 'trapped' on the ferris wheel because Sylar's automatic response to the danger of their heavy make-out session being interrupted was to flash-fry the machinery!

[BTW, in case you get a chance to proof-read a bit more, you might want to re-check the 'Star Wars' part, because there were references to the good guys trying to stop or put an end to the Rebel Alliance -- which was the side Luke and Leia and even Han were at least nominally on -- and trying to save the Empire -- as opposed to overthrowing the evil empire and restoring or reinstituting the more democratic republic form of government. Or was that intentional, reversing the heroes/villains loyalties in SW as a commentary on Sylar's road from villain to hero, or as a subtle way of exposing major sci-fi geeks like me, as we leap forward to say, "Hey, that's not quite right...!" :) ]