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Untill all that is left is dust...

Oct 28, 2010 22:27

Title: Untill all that is left is dust...
Author: fate_incomplete
Rating: PG
Warnings: Angst
Spoilers: 5.04
Characters: future!Dean/future!Cas
Word Count: 1,000
Summary: The broken world slips towards ruin, taking all that once was with it. Dean turns away racked with guilt, Cas watches the coldness and distance grow, both lost and longing for more but unable to ( Read more... )

dean "i think i'm adorable" winchester, spn owns my soul, dean/cas have corrupted me, fic, cas has phone issues he'll call you back

Comments 10

dragonlit October 28 2010, 13:19:19 UTC

Holy!! Ouch!! Beautifully written piece of angst.

fate_incomplete October 29 2010, 00:16:50 UTC

Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it.

ebilchickens October 28 2010, 19:22:46 UTC

Sad and well written.Thanks for posting this.

fate_incomplete October 29 2010, 00:18:54 UTC

Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed it.

whatsername_05 October 28 2010, 21:19:08 UTC

This one gets you to the core. Very well written. I really enjoy your work. :)

fate_incomplete October 29 2010, 00:20:41 UTC

aww thanks for reading *hugs* glad you enjoyed it.

riveroceansea October 29 2010, 02:10:18 UTC

Lovely and hurty--the perfect combination. Loved it.

fate_incomplete October 29 2010, 22:58:32 UTC

thanks so much glad you enjoyed it.

guardian_chaos January 5 2011, 09:13:52 UTC

Dark and haunting, and smoothly written. A quiet, yet subtly powerful piece. You did a good job with this one. The despair is palpable. I want Cas to run after Dean now, haha. Dean's trying to be alone because he feels he deserves it, but surely Cas doesn't want to be alone, either! Silly boys.

fate_incomplete January 5 2011, 10:47:18 UTC

Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Future Dean and Cas were so lost, and even though they were still side by side there just seemed to be a distance between them.