Drabble: Service

[brutti_ma_buoni]

Prompt two got me thinking about Darla. We don't get to know her until far later in the series, so how is she feeling at this early stage?

Comments

[chrisleeoctaves]

This is lush and vibrant and an apt characterization of Darla! Well done.

[menomegirl]

I love this glance at Darla's motivations in this time frame.

[ares132006]

A very lush, rich, pulsing drabble. Your words convey the menace that is Darla.

[scribesds]

I loved this line:

Played the menial, eyes downcast, and served her whipping girl atonement.

*Played* being the operative word. Menial is so unlike the Darla we know, and I love your brief insight into her character at that time.

[acacia5]

That was excellent, and I thought your Darla voice was spot on.