The Beat Back Seasons Part 3: A Winter's (STUPID AND ANNOYING) Chase
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I don't like how I started this arc. It just feels really awkward. I was also losing steam and my paneling/pacing suffering. I was also coming down with something and was feeling some effects of burn-out, and it took me a week or two to realize this =_=;;
Pg. 5: DADDY CAPTAIN! I had a talk with jaina discussing who Rukia should talk to since Ichigo had a little talk with Youruichi. Orihime and Renji were ruled out immediately ('cause that's just... kinda mean :<) THEN CAME THE EPIPHANY OF DADDY-CAPTAIN!!
Only problem I have with Daddy-captain are the two other characters he has in tow :(
Pg. 8: DADDY CAPTAIN BEING DADDY :D :D :D Basically I wanted someone to tell Rukia "Stop saying it won't work when you haven't even tried!" which... would be something Renji/Ichigo/Kaien would say, but... poor Renji! And Kaien's dead, and Rukia's busy running away from Ichigo.
... Maybe I should make Ichigo say that after he catches her to drive that point home.
Pg.16: Rukia with wet hair looks reminiscent of the first time I drew her. Except I used to make her ears visible.
Pg 16-19: I had no appetite for food, but once I got to the part where Ichigo and Rukia were eating ramen, I found myself craving for ramen. But after I ate some, I didn't feel so good. So I made them throw it away.
Pg 19: I'm debating whether if Ichigo says "first" in English or Japanese. Which prolly wouldn't make a difference unless I make a Korean version of the doujin, but since I'm planning on it...
Pg. 23: ... I love Keigo. Sometimes I wonder why I don't draw him as much.
All in all... I didn't really have too much fun with this arc :< At least, not as much as the previous two arcs. And Rukia seemed to accept Ichigo a little too easily...
WAH. I DON'T KNOW.