Under my nose -ToraxSaga - Pt5/5

Mar 06, 2011 15:31

 Title: Under my nose
Chapters: Pt 5/5
Author: fallen_am_i 
Genre: Romance, Dramma,some attempt for humor (?)
Warnings:Boys love, sexual acts between men
Rating: PG-13 to NC - 17, for this one, PG-13
Pairing: Tora x Saga, Shou x Saga (onesided), slight Shou x Hiroto
Synopsis: Onesided love hurts,and Saga tries to find a simple way to forget that pain
Disclaimer: I ( Read more... )

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undertheseaside March 6 2011, 14:13:29 UTC
SPOT! I cheat first!!!

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fallen_am_i March 6 2011, 14:15:50 UTC
LOL and yessss we've got a winner!!! xD

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undertheseaside March 6 2011, 14:42:38 UTC
Ehhh!! you finally end this story!! I gonna to miss this *cries*
where is the sweet lovemaking ROLF?

Saga, you hurt Saga >.< hope there no scars
Finally Queen of stubborn accept his love for Tora kyaaaa!!
Nao, Shou and Hiroto never fail amused me.

Congratulation. The ending was perfect XD
I scream in happy when read the part them intertwined their fingers

wait for your next fic!

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fallen_am_i March 6 2011, 15:15:00 UTC
LOL well,i guess they did that after the movie xD But i wanted to focus on the fluffy part here! :D

I know...But he played the bass roughly O.O :P No,not scars,I would never scar my love... <3

Thank you for your good words! xD

Well, the next one is going to be different from what i've written till now...And i hope i'll have enough chapters soon to start posting! :D

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akri21 March 6 2011, 14:29:23 UTC
yeahhhhhh

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fallen_am_i March 6 2011, 14:36:00 UTC
HA, as if i would ever let my OTP suffer being appart! xD

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silyria March 6 2011, 14:32:29 UTC
Oh, this chapter was so sweet! xD
I liked this story and I am gladit ended this way.

And also congrats to you!! You finished it!!
*throws confetti*

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fallen_am_i March 6 2011, 14:39:04 UTC
Thank you~ Yay~ *jumps and catches confetti in the air* xD
This chapter changed so many forms till it became like that...The only scene that it's the same from the start is the first scene till the bass chord!
I am glad you are glad xD
Oh i couldn't leave them appart and unhappy! xD
Thank you for reading :3

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silyria March 6 2011, 14:46:27 UTC
So this chapter suffered from your "writer's pen" xD
^___^

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fallen_am_i March 6 2011, 15:16:18 UTC
Yeah! ^-^ and i am happy it suffered because it's way more better than my intiate thoughts! And i loved writing the part in the toilet stall! xD

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ni_9achilov3r March 6 2011, 15:06:48 UTC
how sweet >.< god, I like it so much...

Bery bery naisu, naisu! Hehe write more like this XDD

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fallen_am_i March 6 2011, 15:18:16 UTC
heheheheh the next i am preparing is not going to be sweet,but i have plenty of ideas for for fluff,i am more of a fluffy person after all ^-^
Thank you for reading :)

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fallen_am_i March 6 2011, 15:19:57 UTC
Yeah it is!!! <3 The ending troubled me so much till i thought the scene of Saga's moving hands xD
Thank you for reading :3

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