Alice in Wonderland is one of my favorite movies. :) That’s probably why I like this chapter so much. The insanity of changeling magic is really fun to see. I love that Shiro is kinda popping all over the place randomly in Nao’s mind. Like, how he’s not there one second and then he is the next. That’s cool.
And I really loved seeing Ash and Payton again. I really really loved that part. I miss Payton actually. :( Well I miss them both but I would have liked to see more of him like how we saw a whole bunch of Ash until he died that is. So I was happy to see them here again. I also like how Nao was kinda feeling bad about loving Joey and Ash and all that. It was a really realistic feeling for him to have at this point since he loved Ash and Joey like… what a month apart if that? I don’t know the exact timeline very well but I’m going to guess something like that so ya, I liked that that train of emotions was in there. It felt real to me.
And Tawney and Amy were there! Yay ^.^ They made me laugh a lot. I like how it was kinda like they were really there instead of just memories in Nao’s head. So it seemed like he was really talking to Ash and Payton instead of memories of Ash and Payton. That was cool.
And when they were explaining the vaccine, I had one of those moments where I had to stop and think about it for a while before it got straight in my head. That’s a really interesting concept, I love it! Way to make me think again. :)
So the next chapter’s going to be actiony and depressing right? Because this one was too happy? Don’t mind me I’m just trying to predict your story’s mood swings ^.^ I’m still cheerleading over here for you too you know.
You're number one, can't be number 2! And you're going to beat the pants off… those vampires?
Ya I couldn’t adapt that one but I don't remember anymore it’s the thought that counts right? I show love! Can’t wait for the next chapter ^.^
Yes! That is essentially how the Dreaming is though. Shiro popping up everyone is like how the Dreaming just has shit happen just to happen. Suddenly there will be high walls made out of bushes and its a maze and the maze will change with every step. Its as random and fucking weird as dreams.
Just as amazing too. :D
So I was sort of surprised to hear that you missed Payton--because going into this, we sort of expected him not to be liked. Just because of his position in the story--you don't get to see much of him and its hard for us to draw out his good side when it all seems so bad. So I was VERY touched when I read that you liked to see him. :D Thank you so much. :D
A month is a pretty good assessment--we're not sure either. :D Its sort of ambiguous though--its supposed to be fast though. But yes--we really want to add the most realistic themes we can to this. So we are very glad that you found it fitting that Nao was conflicted. It is such a short period of time but in the same instance, the draws they have and the reasons they have such a connection (that is Nao/Ash and Nao/Joey) are intense and not as if they just met over coffee. You know? So we hope that reality is consistently fitting.:D
Tawney and Amy. :D Don't be surprised if after this story, those two end up on our personal LJs often. :D We sort of love Amy and Tee--a lot. :D They're super cute. :D And yes! That was exact ly it. They weren't part of his memory but just magic, part of the Dreaming. Its complicated but we are glad you see it!!!
I hope that is a good thing--we make you think. :D Hopefully not to the point where it is annoying.
Dude!! Good try. :D We don't need fancy cheers--your cheers are great. :D They so count and we LOVE the love. :D Thank you so much!!!!!
Dude, what’s not to like about Payton? I love him. And usually I can tell you why I like a character like ‘oh he’s awesome because of this’ and whatever but I can’t really do that with Payton. I just like him for some unspecific reason. :D
But really the point of me posting this besides boredom is to assure you that I love it when you make me think. Love it love it love it! It happens so rarely lately with most stories so yes, thinking is awesome and never annoying especially now. Make me think ^.^
We were just talking about Payton (not that you were...our conversations don't quite correlate when this was posted two weeks ago. >_<) About he surprised us and we both do love him--quite a bit. :D I am glad you like him though.
Payton is modeled after myself--well let me rephrase that. He base, when he was first created two years ago, came from a lot of my own insecurities and worries. I personally could not kill myself...God no. No matter how depressed I am. But the reason I say that is because I, like him, worry my ass off. :D It's ironic that I worry about a character that worries--a little bit, yes. :D
Thank you for your reassurance though. :D I love that you like him--it makes my spirits higher. :D
And I really loved seeing Ash and Payton again. I really really loved that part. I miss Payton actually. :( Well I miss them both but I would have liked to see more of him like how we saw a whole bunch of Ash until he died that is. So I was happy to see them here again. I also like how Nao was kinda feeling bad about loving Joey and Ash and all that. It was a really realistic feeling for him to have at this point since he loved Ash and Joey like… what a month apart if that? I don’t know the exact timeline very well but I’m going to guess something like that so ya, I liked that that train of emotions was in there. It felt real to me.
And Tawney and Amy were there! Yay ^.^ They made me laugh a lot. I like how it was kinda like they were really there instead of just memories in Nao’s head. So it seemed like he was really talking to Ash and Payton instead of memories of Ash and Payton. That was cool.
And when they were explaining the vaccine, I had one of those moments where I had to stop and think about it for a while before it got straight in my head. That’s a really interesting concept, I love it! Way to make me think again. :)
So the next chapter’s going to be actiony and depressing right? Because this one was too happy? Don’t mind me I’m just trying to predict your story’s mood swings ^.^ I’m still cheerleading over here for you too you know.
You're number one, can't be number 2! And you're going to beat the pants off… those vampires?
Ya I couldn’t adapt that one but I don't remember anymore it’s the thought that counts right? I show love! Can’t wait for the next chapter ^.^
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Just as amazing too. :D
So I was sort of surprised to hear that you missed Payton--because going into this, we sort of expected him not to be liked. Just because of his position in the story--you don't get to see much of him and its hard for us to draw out his good side when it all seems so bad. So I was VERY touched when I read that you liked to see him. :D Thank you so much. :D
A month is a pretty good assessment--we're not sure either. :D Its sort of ambiguous though--its supposed to be fast though. But yes--we really want to add the most realistic themes we can to this. So we are very glad that you found it fitting that Nao was conflicted. It is such a short period of time but in the same instance, the draws they have and the reasons they have such a connection (that is Nao/Ash and Nao/Joey) are intense and not as if they just met over coffee. You know? So we hope that reality is consistently fitting.:D
Tawney and Amy. :D Don't be surprised if after this story, those two end up on our personal LJs often. :D We sort of love Amy and Tee--a lot. :D They're super cute. :D And yes! That was exact ly it. They weren't part of his memory but just magic, part of the Dreaming. Its complicated but we are glad you see it!!!
I hope that is a good thing--we make you think. :D Hopefully not to the point where it is annoying.
Dude!! Good try. :D We don't need fancy cheers--your cheers are great. :D They so count and we LOVE the love. :D Thank you so much!!!!!
-J
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But really the point of me posting this besides boredom is to assure you that I love it when you make me think. Love it love it love it! It happens so rarely lately with most stories so yes, thinking is awesome and never annoying especially now. Make me think ^.^
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Payton is modeled after myself--well let me rephrase that. He base, when he was first created two years ago, came from a lot of my own insecurities and worries. I personally could not kill myself...God no. No matter how depressed I am. But the reason I say that is because I, like him, worry my ass off. :D It's ironic that I worry about a character that worries--a little bit, yes. :D
Thank you for your reassurance though. :D I love that you like him--it makes my spirits higher. :D
-J
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