as is tradition...

[eyetastelikesex]

Girl

She's gaudy,
so bawdy, and
she always fucking ignores me.

It's agonising,
so paralysing, but
her silence is almost tantalising.

I'd leave,
to grieve, but
it's too painful to be a reprieve.

So I stay,
to decay, and
irony strikes as I waste away.

it's also on my poetry lj poeticparadigm so apologies to those who have that friended and have seen this

Comments

[maytel]

You're my fucking hero.

If I could write like that and then sing it, I would have no more problems.
But I am glad that you exist even tho I feel like stealing from you all the time.

It's so painful it hurts.

[maytel]

oh.. btw you I had left you a french msg on my lj :(

[eyetastelikesex]

thanks, so much.

honestly, I'm really flattered and happy that you like the poem/my writing ability so much. and yeah it does have more of a song-y vibe to it. you can feel free to sing it, if you want. that'd be great to have this turned into a song. it's the kinda thing that's versatile to coz it could easily lose some S's and be renamed "Boy"

anyway, yeah, it's painful. but I'm glad I could get it out there.

thanks again. later!

[maytel]

I wish you lived close to here!! We could write songs and could drink and do silly stuff together.

[eyetastelikesex]

yeah, that would be quite kickass.