To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing, 13: Too Much To Bear

[exquisite_ugly]

Title: To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing

Author: exquisite_ugly

Rating/Warnings: M (language, sexual situations)

Summary: After the newborn fight things take a different turn with the Volturi. Edward goes missing, the Cullen's leave to search for him, and Bella flees town from the pain of loss. Can Jacob help her deal with the grief a second time? AU

Comments

[lsjcandy]

Ok...trying not to give you hard time....but...ARGH. This Bella is insane.

Bella, "I don't want to hurt you Jake, but you can leave your family to live with me, sleep in the same bed as me. But um, now that I need to move on...I'm gonna date other people."

*insert bitchslap here!!!*

This, like, exactly this.
Bella makes me want to kick cute puppies. (She always does that, so why not me?) But.. that's normal. She always knows how to enrage me.

Anyways, update soon! (Can I ask which song by Sara Bareilles you're listening?)

[exquisite_ugly]

Bella is definitely smack!worthy right now... she's gone a little beyond and not making the best choices. She was never quite smart about love, though, so I think that's to be expected. ;) Thanks for reviewing!

And the song is "Breathe Again".. reeeally good song. It's off the Kaleidoscope Heart CD.

[exquisite_ugly]

Thank you for not roasting me ;)

I've been afraid of reading my reviews.. haha. But yes, Bella is insane right now. The confusion over her feelings for him on top of feeling like she's losing the Cullen's - and with Edward's future so unclear - is making her irrational. All I can say is Bella (and even Jake) will be learning some lessons!

Thanks for reading/bearing with me!

[willow2883]

First I'll start with the earlier part of the story, then I'll give you a tongue lashing. JK
I have to say I wondered where you were going to go introducing Brandon, who has an obvious crush on Bella, into the story. *grumbles* Never saw that coming though.
Then Lindsay.....made me think 'hmmmmmm'.

When she stood I could see she was the willow-y type

I will just insert myself here, seeing as she's the 'willowy' type. LOL
And I have to admit, I almost started to cry when Bella had the conversation with Alice. Who would have thought that Edward and the Cullens could bring tears to my eyes? That was perfect and realistic, Meg.
*taps foot on ground* Now for the date young lady

[exquisite_ugly]

Yeah, I thought people might wonder about me introducing them in. haha. And I can always count on you, Wills, to cut me a little slack. ;) I'm glad the Alice/Bella talk was effective.. I wanted it to be seen that she's trying not to be selfish, but was grieving because of telling Bella what she did.

And thank you.. seems there was some split opinions on her reasons behind doing this. Good points made, but as you said that's pretty much her intention. She loves Jake, but is scared of a lot of shit right now. Though lets say still not a smart move to involve someone else into the mess... hmm. Oh, the possibilities. ;)

Anyway, thank you hun.. I'm glad you enjoyed it even if it was sad. :) Oh, and I agree.. anger and tension makes great sex. ::ponders:: lol

[willow2883]

P.S. Reading imprint2@'s comment and yeah, anger + tension = awesome sex!
Just saying!