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spuffyduds March 20 2011, 18:18:44 UTC
That's so lovely and sad and hopeful and heartbreaking.

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exbex March 20 2011, 20:42:51 UTC
TYK. He'll be alright though.

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sl_walker March 20 2011, 20:43:44 UTC
Awww...! I actually love introspective sex -- while sex can be fun, it's also us at our most vulnerable to another person, and that often begs for thought. Nice capturing that!

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exbex March 20 2011, 20:46:46 UTC
Since the prompt was about Fraser not being able to talk about it, I decided the whole not talking element needed to be carried through, though I was a bit sad that, with such a prompt as this, I wasn't able to turn myself on. Oh well.

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sl_walker March 20 2011, 20:48:55 UTC
LOL! It's funny, I can't turn myself on writing porn to save my life -- too caught up in the mechanics of writing, the placement of words, to do it. But I certainly understand.

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plotbunniofdoom March 20 2011, 22:46:12 UTC
Oh, I love this. <3

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exbex March 21 2011, 00:01:26 UTC
:D

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kalijean March 20 2011, 22:53:02 UTC
Lovely imagery indeed. <3

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exbex March 21 2011, 00:01:34 UTC
:D

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thursdaynext_27 March 21 2011, 02:46:01 UTC
That last line is heartbreaking and beautiful.

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exbex March 21 2011, 02:50:09 UTC
True. He'll be okay though.

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