[Fic] Access Denied: 07

[evilgeniuskoji]

Title: Access Denied
Chapter: 7/??
Author: evilgeniuskoji
Pairing: Reita/Ruki
Genre: Mystery, suspense, scifi
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Summary: AU. Saiko Reality is the hottest new virtual reality simulator. With an in-game experience that questions your reality and theirs, PSC's newest product has establishd a wide branch all over Central Tokyo. Such a large

Comments

[hereticpop]

haha, I was just thinking yesterday about whether you were going to update soon. :D

the Reita/Ruki undertones are really cute in a subtle way. still, I somehow like this indifferent Ruki. he's very 'real'. the part where he asks Reita if they were close: aww. I was waiting for something like this, I mean, he finally met people who used to know him before, so he has an occasion to get to know something about his own past.

finally a lil more about Saiko and what actually happened to Ruki that caused him to lose memory. yay! I really like that, somehow it all makes sense, even though it's a made-up game. XD

I find very interesting the pre-memory-loss-Ruki vs. post-memory-loss-Ruki matter. like when Reita wonders about if he has changed and when Ruki asks
“And what was I doing helping you?”

Something in Aoi seemed to snap. “Because you were a decent person, dammit!”
[this made me laugh]. I really wonder if Ruki changed or if it's just the fact that he doesn't remember those guys.

ha ha, evil Kai finally revealed! alright, so I feel he isn't going to turn out to be all that evil, but still. he works for the bad guys. *die, Kai, die* but poor Ruki, what is he going to believe in now?

very entertaining chapter. keep it going! :)

[evilgeniuskoji]

Ahhh, I am SO sorry for the long wait.

Hopefully you weren't let down about that part. Yeah, I really tried to make sure Saiko makes sense in general.

We will see. Hopefully things will come out faster, but summer's nearly over! D;