[Fic] Access Denied: 07

Aug 01, 2009 02:08

Title: Access Denied
Chapter: 7/??
Author: evilgeniuskoji
Pairing: Reita/Ruki
Genre: Mystery, suspense, scifi
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Summary: AU. Saiko Reality is the hottest new virtual reality simulator. With an in-game experience that questions your reality and theirs, PSC's newest product has establishd a wide branch all over Central Tokyo. Such a large ( Read more... )

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dream_of_kawaii August 1 2009, 10:17:33 UTC
Oh noes, Kai! T_T
I get the feeling Ruki may not swallow that information easily when he's already having doubts about Aoi and Reita. =/

By the way, im finding Reita really adorable... is it bad that i enjoy how icy Ruki is towards him. xD Dorky/nervous Reita combined with a stubborn and determined Ruki is always a good mix. ^^ Great chapter. Its like the calm before the storm. xP

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evilgeniuskoji August 1 2009, 15:17:42 UTC
Most likely not.

Oh, no, I enjoy that too. 8D It's quite fun. Thank you for reading!

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hara_emi August 1 2009, 10:57:15 UTC
Kai D= I knew ts was something like that but still. PSC must have a crazy scary number of staff and power to sent Kai to keep a lookout for Ruki. It's so aawful as RUki probably sees him as one of his closest frieds as of since 3 years ago.

Aww, Reita does seem to observe Ruki a little too much doesn't he? XD I definitely sense some attraction there. His awkwardness is so cute! I hope to see the chemistry between Rei and Ruki that previously existed ast time >_

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evilgeniuskoji August 1 2009, 15:16:37 UTC
8D PSC is starting to seem like some giant mafia, isn't it?

We'll see. Hopefully it turns out alright.

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inudela August 1 2009, 12:01:01 UTC
this update made me happy :)

I like how you're giving us tastes of the past without actual flashbacks here..like the familiarity ruki felt when he saw reita sleeping. that was sweet.

And with Kai...well, i guess there was something suspicious about him, but I'm still disappointed..after all, he was what seemed like Ruki's closest friend in those three years. Info like that is not going to be digested easily xD

Can't wait for what you come up with next :D

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evilgeniuskoji August 1 2009, 15:15:23 UTC
I'm glad it did! So sorry it took so long. ><;; I'll try my best to churn out tne next quickly, but it may be some weeks.

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damono_hito August 1 2009, 13:05:14 UTC
Oh hell, this is so exciting! I had a feeling that Kai is somehow on the bad side but an employee? I feel so bad for Ruki now... Really, A three years old friendship is really just an act? ... Poor Ruki.

But I really love Reita in this. He's so shy and kinda dorky~ Love him~ And also, it's nice to know that Ruki is having somekind of memories of Rei coming back to him. Like that Rei-looks-horrible-when-sleeping- part. And oh! They have slept together before~~? *is perv* :''D

Aoi is scaring me. XD He's like shouting at Ruki that he's a good person... Scary. But then he's sweet, trying to comfort Ruki saying that it's gonna be alright and all...

Btw, the fact that the coffee was cold made me laugh. XD I don't even know why. *is weird*

But I seriously love this fic and I'm really sorry that I haven't commented on the chapters before... *bows many times* Please update soon~~!

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evilgeniuskoji August 1 2009, 15:13:35 UTC
Haha, thank you! Reita's character has been somewhat of a struggle, and I'm glad you find him enjoyable.

Aoi is a scary person. -nods- And Ruki doesn't like cold coffee at all. :3

It's fine, I'm glad you finally commented! Hopefully this time the chapter will be up soon. =/

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hereticpop August 1 2009, 14:59:57 UTC
haha, I was just thinking yesterday about whether you were going to update soon. :D

the Reita/Ruki undertones are really cute in a subtle way. still, I somehow like this indifferent Ruki. he's very 'real'. the part where he asks Reita if they were close: aww. I was waiting for something like this, I mean, he finally met people who used to know him before, so he has an occasion to get to know something about his own past.

finally a lil more about Saiko and what actually happened to Ruki that caused him to lose memory. yay! I really like that, somehow it all makes sense, even though it's a made-up game. XD

I find very interesting the pre-memory-loss-Ruki vs. post-memory-loss-Ruki matter. like when Reita wonders about if he has changed and when Ruki asks
“And what was I doing helping you?”

Something in Aoi seemed to snap. “Because you were a decent person, dammit!”[this made me laugh]. I really wonder if Ruki changed or if it's just the fact that he doesn't remember those guys ( ... )

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evilgeniuskoji August 1 2009, 15:10:42 UTC
Ahhh, I am SO sorry for the long wait.

Hopefully you weren't let down about that part. Yeah, I really tried to make sure Saiko makes sense in general.

We will see. Hopefully things will come out faster, but summer's nearly over! D;

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