Slinking? I think you mean wan instead of wane? Use a dash instead of a comma after wane; or employ a semi-comma. Cloud wouldn't care, succumbed to the ill fated role of a hero. Poor Cloud.
Oh, and yes, I meant slinking. Kinda like guilty people do when they're trying not to be notices, or scavenger animals. I was trying to go for some sort of symbolism? I think? -.-.;;;
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It's bittersweet. :3
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>.> He's doomed to be a weepy little uke.
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I really liked the imagrey (sp? 0_o) at the beggining. Super wicked sweet <3
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