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[esoteric_derek]

Since someone was somewhat interested in reading the intro to my story, I've got it below. It's only a few paragraphs, but I want honest opinions, none of this "It's good", when you're really thinking "I couldn't physically read past the third sentence otherwise my head would explode"... if you don't feel comfortable telling how you really feel on

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1st impressions...

[my_journalism]

Good start, gives me a Twin Peaks, weirdo vibe.

and I think Russ McMaine posted a reply to a post. I would love to meet him.