holidays and holy days chapter 4

[erinmar13]

Helena's Revenge
the latin is translated at the end(thank you TONS fitful_fire). and a quick beta once over was given by magicmumu, so thanks to you as well.

Comments

[magicmumu]

I am glad to see the translation. That is beautiful to know that, and to see Helena so insecure to hear it almost broke my heart. I love how you showed Helena to have her moments like this and how she's able to let Myka conquer her. This story was sweet as much as it was hot, and a great Christmas read that will quickly replace 'The Night Before Christmas' for me. :)

Erin

[foxsmoulder]

"focusing on Myka's glistening thighs and the treasure between them."

Great line! Yeah should never read such things on the work computer.

You know what you are reading is good when the cat jumps on you and you realize your breath has quickened to match the characters in the story, so you look around your empty living room and and clear your throat...Soo nice work ;)

[erinmar13]

haha *bows* i will take that as the compliment it is so clearly intended to be.

[erinmar13]

thank you. i'm quite fond of this chapter.

[oxinterruptedxo]

That was hot & sweet. I loved it. I love Helena's bit of insecurity as well.

[erinmar13]

one of those things you can thank helena the muse for. i had no intention or clue that was going to happen. and yet...i so love it. it's beautiful.

[green78]

...shower...cold...need...going now...

I LOVE how you always manage to write such an amazing combination of romantically sweet and scaldingly HOT all at once. Really, really well done. I LOVE it! And "howling heights" = WIN.

[erinmar13]

what can i say, i'm a whore for alliteration.
romantically sweet and scaldingly hot, exactly what i aim for, glad to know i hit the mark ;)