i know, but i wanted to kinda cover a lot of things and well, yeah. this is how it turned out. i really am surprised about the artifact. it just came to me, a bed that makes amps up touch. and the rest just kind of came together. it literally took me all of five minutes and 2 sites to get an origin for the bed. and i've already started on chapter 8.
Totally want some time in that bed. Just long enough to experience it. xD AWESOME chapter!!! LOVE Claudia and Leena in this - you've got them down pat. :)
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a few spelling errors here and there, and you started off kind of choppy for a bit.
regardless, i really liked this chapter. more please?
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i really am surprised about the artifact. it just came to me, a bed that makes amps up touch. and the rest just kind of came together. it literally took me all of five minutes and 2 sites to get an origin for the bed.
and i've already started on chapter 8.
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s'kinda how Pavlov's Bell came to me when i filled that prompt in the Comment-Fic Party. Sometimes it jsut happens that way.
Chapter 8 already? Woot!
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That bed would be hard to stay away from, evening knowing what will happen if you use it too much!
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Waiting for more! :)
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nice to know i'm doing a good job with her.
and gods, that bed.....
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"Is there anything you can't do with your hands?"
HG raised an eyebrow and flashed a wicked smile. "You would be a better judge of that than I."
YUM!!
Erin
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