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fried_heart June 9 2012, 00:05:27 UTC
What? WHAT? (please prepare yourlef for a long comment)
First off, if Brendon and Ryan were totally dating and public in real life, they would totally make love. All day, erryday. So, this is totally accurate. I mean, just look at them! Two gorgeous men in a relationship. I wouldn't blame them if they did it too much.
Also, I was laughing when Ryan was explaining what happened. I mean, THE DETAIL. Lord almighty.
AND, YESSS!!!!!! JONCER!!!!! I imagine what might've happened in the photobooth when they were 'taking pictures'. Like, "Spencer, baby, you're so flawless. Your blue eyes are so sparkly and I can see your beautiful soul. I want you." LOL. As you can see, my writing is horrible. OMG the carnival was SO sweet! Like, I said out loud, "Jesus mothertrucker, I want a Unicorn. I want a Leonard." My mind is going haywire.
Lastly, WHAT THE FUCK?!? Why did you have to fucking kill off Ryan's mother? I know what you're gonna say: "Well, I need something to make this more interesting and awesome blah blah blah." Well DAMMIT. You need to fix this mess at once. I can't stand sad Ryan. I bet Ryan will be all sad and whe Brendon tries to help him he'll be all "I just need some time alone." And then that will lead to some nasty things. I dunno. I always have sad scenarios in my mind when I'm given a freakin' cliffhanger.
Anyway, that's everything.
And ew, I think I was still in school when this was posted. Booo, no chance for FC.

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ericasaur June 9 2012, 01:22:38 UTC
Did you not read my note at the top? I already said I wasn't making them break up. And I don't know why everyone is mad at me for having someone die. I can't just keep going without any conflict, or it'll just turn into fluff.
I mean, people need to calm down, it's my story. And people will probably feel bad for jumping on me when they read the next chapter, because it's going to be really sweet, and I couldn't have written it unless she died.
Anyway, I knew people would be happy about Joncer. <3 There'll be a little more, but I'm not going to focus on them.

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fried_heart June 9 2012, 01:51:23 UTC
No! I meant that they might have some problems or something. Idk.. I imagine the worst things that could happen. My bad.
Anyway, I totally support your decisions, good or bad. I was just a bit... surprised and outraged.
Ooh! There'll be awesome things next chapter?
I apologize for attacking you.

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ericasaur June 9 2012, 02:18:18 UTC
It's alright, it's just that everyone has been like saying they hate me for this chapter and it's kind of annoying. Dx Anyway, yes awesome things for next chapter. c:

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