Aaron's Poetry Corner.
Okay. This is a VERY rough draft. I still intend to tweak it, but it doesn't sound too bad. HONEST OPINIONS PEOPLE AND *CONSTRUCTIVE* CRITICISM!!
Blaze Bright (a working title)
Let those who hear me know of this shared plight,
And claw and rage and bite
To let the fire blaze bright.
Bring honest hate with every attack.
Let it tear, rip, and boil with acid's bite
And watch me smile as I fight back
It's not enough to suffer where none hear your cries;
Beaten, broken, bloodied with words as sharp as knives.
No man shall take the fire from my eyes.
Mangled lacerations with no reprieve in sight,
A blessed hell of lost souls,
Repercussions loaded with hatred's plight.
Let me burn, let me fry,
Cold emptiness inside.
A mirthless laugh sold with every lie.
Don't pretend to know or care.
Past the tears of blood where lie my silent cries,
See the fire still burning in my eyes
And the blinding blaze from where my torn heart lies.
...yep, needs work. A LOT of it. But I'm sure the emotion was there. ^_^
Blaze Bright (a working title)
Let those who hear me know of this shared plight,
And claw and rage and bite
To let the fire blaze bright.
Bring honest hate with every attack.
Let it tear, rip, and boil with acid's bite
And watch me smile as I fight back
It's not enough to suffer where none hear your cries;
Beaten, broken, bloodied with words as sharp as knives.
No man shall take the fire from my eyes.
Mangled lacerations with no reprieve in sight,
A blessed hell of lost souls,
Repercussions loaded with hatred's plight.
Let me burn, let me fry,
Cold emptiness inside.
A mirthless laugh sold with every lie.
Don't pretend to know or care.
Past the tears of blood where lie my silent cries,
See the fire still burning in my eyes
And the blinding blaze from where my torn heart lies.
...yep, needs work. A LOT of it. But I'm sure the emotion was there. ^_^