Comments | epeeblade: Fic: Cadence of Her Last Breath (Sex Corps) (Jeff/Katie)

epeeblade

Fic: Cadence of Her Last Breath (Sex Corps) (Jeff/Katie)

Jan 23, 2010 23:58

Title: Cadence of Her Last Breath ( Read more... )

jeff/katie, het, my fic, sex corps

Comments 19

lomer January 24 2010, 06:04:23 UTC

Poor Jeff. It's great to get his backstory though. I love this verse.

epeeblade January 24 2010, 19:40:33 UTC

It was finally his turn:) Thanks for reading!

ladykatiewench January 25 2010, 03:59:46 UTC

HEY LOMER!! MISS YOU!! LOVE YOU!! BYE BYE!!

lomer January 25 2010, 04:05:49 UTC

*g* Hey Katie. I miss you and love you too. When I get a phone again I'll give you a call. Hopefully all my contacts will be saved in my iTunes so I won't have to attempt to track down all my friends and request phone numbers.

1orelei January 24 2010, 13:50:25 UTC

Don't know why, but the part where he was driving over recently surfaced roads? I had to stop for a bit. It was really lovely, what they'd built together.

Thank you.

epeeblade January 24 2010, 19:48:54 UTC

*hugs* When I was editing I nearly teared up during that exact sequence. Poor Jeff...

Thank you for reading!

ladykatiewench January 25 2010, 03:58:34 UTC

Oh so wonderful! So beautiful and sad to see what he'd been through. LOVE IT!

epeeblade January 25 2010, 20:51:56 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

pineapplejack January 25 2010, 09:26:52 UTC

It was really nice to get a back story of Jeff that didn't reveal too much (sometimes less is better :)), but further fleshed him out. And I am in love with your world building for this verse, especially Katie's comment on the hover craft. Cannot wait for more.

epeeblade January 25 2010, 20:52:34 UTC

Thank you:)

I think most people want more Jeff/Jensen (so do I!), but I needed to tell Jeff's story.

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

acquiescence_ January 25 2010, 10:21:22 UTC

Man I really love the world building you've done in this verse. Every piece is just really nicely done and described enough that I can picture it and the characters you've created in that world. It just makes each bit you add to this that much more pleasurable to read - to add on to the bits and peaces of this world each time.

And the emotions, in this piece in particular. I really enjoy your style of writing, because it doesn't seem to be cluttered up but it has just enough to get your point across without being overbearing and I really like that.

Thanks for sharing this.

epeeblade January 25 2010, 20:58:57 UTC

Thank you so much! Your words mean a lot to me. I struggle sometimes with writing emotion, and I'm glad it worked for you. I'm so happy to share this world with people who want to know more!

Thank you for reading!