Comments | epeeblade: Fic: Whoever brings the night (RPS, JA/JDM)

epeeblade

Fic: Whoever brings the night (RPS, JA/JDM)

Jul 17, 2008 20:46

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rps, supernatural, my fic, slash, sex corps

Comments 33

lapillus July 18 2008, 01:09:14 UTC

Hurray! It's up!

poisontaster July 18 2008, 18:30:08 UTC

This is really interesting. I'm kind of fascinated by the idea of Jensen being wired in this very specific way and being farmed out to the Sex Corps as a consequence. I'm really interested to see where you go with this.

epeeblade July 19 2008, 15:24:53 UTC

Thank you! I sorta had this idea about Jensen being a "true" submissive, and portraying him as being strong, capable and in search of a master worthy of his submission. And then I needed plot and to play with the ideas of consent and slavery. We'll see how far I can go with this!

Thanks for the comment!

poisontaster July 20 2008, 15:57:24 UTC

*nodsnods* And I think that's something that's missed out on a lot in D/s stories. I think a lot of people can't conceive of or can't effectively write a strong sub; it's always top=strong/bottom=weak. And...it's not always like that. And it doesn't HAVE to be like that. And I don't like the implied pejorative that it's bad to be the bottom. So I'm really interested to see where you go here. And how. :D

lapillus July 21 2008, 05:46:18 UTC

Yes! I have been reading waaaaay too many stories recently where either the sub has all the strength of tea from a thrice brewed teabag or where the author has made the sub whiny or stubborn or intransigent rather than actually, you know, strong. And I don't think that those authors get that the biggest payoff in consensual powerplay is the willing surrender of strength to strength. (It can also be a huge payoff in less consensual kinds of powerfic but is less critical there.)

Oh well I suspect my luck in generally finding well written D/s fanfic is about the same finding well written slavefic with with quietly competent slaves and three dimensional characters (my other current fanfic quest.)

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nilchance July 18 2008, 19:50:38 UTC

Hnngh. This is lovely. Detailed and interesting worldbuilding, the HOT HOT sexxing, the d/s hints... I love it. I want more. I'll beg pretty?

epeeblade July 19 2008, 15:25:42 UTC

Aw, thank you! I'm trying to be better with the world building. This universe has been in my head for a while.

As for more, I hope so, but we'll see where the muses go. Stupid muse has been very fickle this month. *pouts at him*

xenasoul July 23 2008, 06:58:09 UTC

Wow....I love the Sex Corps:) lol
This is hot...plan to write more???
Pretty plz?

epeeblade July 25 2008, 02:40:56 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

I am working on some more;)

niccy07 July 23 2008, 09:28:21 UTC

This was very good. I love the dynamics between Jensen and Jeff. I also love how you didn't make this a stereotypical BDSM piece. Pls say there will be more? This series looks great.

epeeblade July 25 2008, 02:41:57 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I'm doing my best to keep away from the stereotypes. I like turning traditional concepts upside down.

I am working on more:)