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enigmaroolz

FMA Fan Fic Untitled

Aug 27, 2006 14:34

FIC:
Title: Untitled
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Pairing: Al x Roy
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2781
Disclaimer: These characters are not mine and this is written purely for enjoyment purposes.
Warnings: Movie spoilers big time. Hence, if you aren't at least familiar with the end of the series, then you don't want to read this.
Summary: Alphonse ( Read more... )

Comments 5

momoiro_usagi August 28 2006, 00:36:34 UTC

Awwww, that was absolutely adorable! :) Roy/Al is a bit of a weakness of mine, and you handled the pairing so well! I really like the idea of Roy and Al comforting each other over Ed's disappearance, and the optimism you portrayed between them fit their characters so well! I loved absolutely everything! *huggles* Thank you so much! ^_^

enigmaroolz August 28 2006, 05:53:37 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you were pleased. As stressful as your life has been of late, you needed something calming. --smile-- I hope your mom is doing well. I had emergency gall bladder surgery three years ago, and . . . wow! It hit me like a ton of bricks! I really thought for awhile that I was dying because the pain radiated across my chest and over my heart!

As for the pairing, I just couldn't think of any plausible excuse for more physical intimacy between the two of them. I still maintain that Roy is not a pedophile, despite all the fan fic out there. --small smile-- He would not take advantage of either of the Elric brothers, but especially not Al. I'm really glad you "loved absolutely everything." --grin-- After all, it's written especially for you!

BTW . . . What an appropriate icon! --grin--

momoiro_usagi August 28 2006, 13:03:27 UTC

I agree completely about Roy. Having sex with Ed is one thing, but Ed's maturity level is way beyond Al's, and I really don't see Roy wanting a child like that. I think a PG is often much more endearing with pairings like this, because there is a lot of respect conveyed in the fact that Roy didn't try to have sex with him in spite of their situation. What you did with the pairing fit perfectly ( ... )

chrstphrl August 28 2006, 02:58:58 UTC

Lovely. So sweet and sad. I love how it feels like Al is the one being gentle with Roy.

enigmaroolz August 28 2006, 05:55:28 UTC

I wanted to convey the feeling of their finding comfort in each other. Thanks so much for reading and commenting! I'm glad you liked it . . . but your taking the time to drop a comment means a lot to me!