Pain In The Heart - Part 2

[emmachase]

Author: emmachase 
Requested by: No One
Title: Pain In The Heart P2
Rating: PG
Genre: Romance, Tragedy, with a bit of fluffy fluff/Angst
Pairing: OkaJima
Summary: Something has gone wrong as JUMP returns from its break, one of its members is missing... and they must find and bring him back.
Notes: I'm so nervous about this one too! No one requested this one

Comments

[ai_star]

woot...woot....wooooooooooooooooooooooooo....I'm seriously in love with this fic...

huwaaaaaaa...Dai-chan so cool ne?....^__^..

kyaaaaa...I love the ending yo...♥...

hahah....what?...english muffin?...hahhaha...

[emmachase]

Haha thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it.... I was so worried about this fic....

[taiga_luise]

Aw!
I'm happy that everything worked out^^
Your writing is kewl!
And it's OKAJIMA *__*

[emmachase]

Thanks for saying so! hehe yes. OKAJIMA! =O

[shieldemblem]

OHEMGEE~
OKAJIMA'S BACK~!
*WOOTZ!*

now it's time for my long comment about it~
*that includes many quoting.. harhar! >=]!*

“Yuto… “ Keito put his pillow over his face and screamed into it, his frustration lessened somewhat for the moment.
“Are you trying to yell at your pillow?” A voice asked.
“Whuh?” Keito removed the pillow to see Daiki’s face above him, blinking in wonder.
“D-Dai-chan! What brings you here?” Keito sat up quickly, pretending as if nothing were happening.

at first, I thought I'm gonna cry all the way through, but then Daiki just had to break Keito's frustrations which made me laugh! *haha!* LoLz!

“The next time you see Yuto… you had better grab hold of him and tell him all your worries…tell him that you’re here if he needs you. Don’t force yourself into his problems. Yuto is a prideful person, accepting help, may not make him feel any better, only until he knows he’s tried his best, can he accept assistance. Ne?” Daiki nodded.

whoa.. is this what a cute Daiki could say?! ROFL! it doesn't match his face! XDD!

[emmachase]

Hehe it was fun to read! and Yesh, Daiki is soooo dam cool! Did I make you cry...? lol

I couldn't have my readers crying tooo too much.... otherwise it'd be too hard to read on.....see I'm thinking of you....

[emmachase]

Haha think I write too many sad ones? ^_-?

Yesh love conquers everything!

Announcing is nice... it makes it less surprising lol