Pain In The Heart - Part 2

[emmachase]

Author: emmachase 
Requested by: No One
Title: Pain In The Heart P2
Rating: PG
Genre: Romance, Tragedy, with a bit of fluffy fluff/Angst
Pairing: OkaJima
Summary: Something has gone wrong as JUMP returns from its break, one of its members is missing... and they must find and bring him back.
Notes: I'm so nervous about this one too! No one requested this one

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[shieldemblem]

OHEMGEE~
OKAJIMA'S BACK~!
*WOOTZ!*

now it's time for my long comment about it~
*that includes many quoting.. harhar! >=]!*

“Yuto… “ Keito put his pillow over his face and screamed into it, his frustration lessened somewhat for the moment.
“Are you trying to yell at your pillow?” A voice asked.
“Whuh?” Keito removed the pillow to see Daiki’s face above him, blinking in wonder.
“D-Dai-chan! What brings you here?” Keito sat up quickly, pretending as if nothing were happening.

at first, I thought I'm gonna cry all the way through, but then Daiki just had to break Keito's frustrations which made me laugh! *haha!* LoLz!

“The next time you see Yuto… you had better grab hold of him and tell him all your worries…tell him that you’re here if he needs you. Don’t force yourself into his problems. Yuto is a prideful person, accepting help, may not make him feel any better, only until he knows he’s tried his best, can he accept assistance. Ne?” Daiki nodded.

whoa.. is this what a cute Daiki could say?! ROFL! it doesn't match his face! XDD!

Meanwhile, Yuto was laying on the hard stone floor of a factory, curled up in an old blanket.

what the hell is Yuto doing in a factory?! that was what I first thought until I've read it till the end...

“Keito… “ He whispered again, closing his eyes as warm tears streaked down his face and washed through the dirt and blood on his cheeks, providing his only warmth for that night.

seriously, if Yuto wants more warmth, he would have to hug Keito who is HALF-NAKED~ >=]! that way, he'll be much much more warm~ *perverted mind on the run*

“Answer me…. Please…” Keito whispered as he braced himself. A foot landed on his back and he felt his elbows slam into the ground below. He was determined, not to let them hit Yuto anymore. He felt another foot kick his knee, and he winced in pain, but kept his embrace upon the still boy in his arms.

“HEY! What are you doing!?” Daiki’s voice rang into the alley way as he rushed forward and dispatched one of the men with a swift kick to the gut. Watching one of their comrades hobble away, the other to men began to take swings at Daiki, who dodged and swept both their feet, tripping them and knocking them on the ground. He turned around and put his foot on the chest of one of them, holding him in place as the other ran away towards their first, still-hobbling friend.

this quote DEFINITELY MOVED ME~ It really fits Keito's character inside and out!
and yesh, DAIKI IS SO DAMN COOL! 'nuff said.. XDD!

“No… I want to tell you. One of the guys recognized me… and told the boss guy that I must have had money to give. He said that…… that if I were to give him 10 million yen… he would let my family and I go. He promised me… that he would let me collect it over the course of a few days. He promised me… before he left… they took my family…. Before he left, he ripped Raiya from my hands, and told me if I told anyone… I’d only be bringing them into trouble, that I would only end up killing them in the long run. Oh god… as they dragged him away… I can still see him, I can see Raiya crying for me…” Yuto’s tears came out again.

so this is where it explains me everything I am so confused about~ X33! *phew*

he pair stared into each other’s eyes as they drifted closer and closer until finally, their lips met and they shared a sweet and passionate kiss. The feelings they had been experiencing welled up within them and expressed themselves in this kiss.

*WOOHOO!!!*
FINALLY, THEY FINALLY KISSED!!!
*ya know, they could've gone farther.. afterall, they're in the same bed in the same room in the hospital (O__O)! PERVERTED MIND ON THE LOOSE!*

“Yeah…. We are aren’t we….. my english muffin?” Yuto nearly cracked up as he said it. Keito laughed as he heard Yuto’s attempt to be cute.
“Yeah…. We are, my breadstick…..” Yuto gave a fake gasp of shock and pushed Keito into the nearby sofa before laughing and jumping into his lap. The two shared a kiss again and smiled.

HERE COMES THE CORNY PART~ *WOOHOO!*
OKAJIMA PAWNS!!! XDD!

told ya I'm gonna post a pretty llooonngg comment! XDD! *haha!* LoLz!

[emmachase]

Hehe it was fun to read! and Yesh, Daiki is soooo dam cool! Did I make you cry...? lol

I couldn't have my readers crying tooo too much.... otherwise it'd be too hard to read on.....see I'm thinking of you....