Big Bang Fic: On Whom the Pale Moon Gleams (Chapter 7)

[embolalia]

Title: On Whom the Pale Moon Gleams (Chapter 7)
Characters: Kara, Daniel, background Kara/Lee
Rating: PG-13
Words: ~15,500 (2,000 this chapter)
Summary: On the other side of the maelstrom, Kara wakes up to truths she never expected.

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Six

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Chapter Seven

Comments

[kdbleu]

I realized last night as I was going to bed how heartbreaking it was that Kara lost all of her memories of her father and Earth when she went back. A clever solution, more so than what the show came up with, but sad that she had to forget her renewed connection to Lee. (And the knowledge that Sam is pretty much her Grandfather. eww- kinda)

The scene between Lee and Daniel is so sad too. Daniel has lost Kara just as much and can't tell anyone.

Daniel as God is pretty awesome. Great little detail.

[embolalia]

Thanks! And as for all the angst of it ... just wait, there's one more chapter :)

[kdbleu]

I was wondering how many more chapters. I will miss it angst and all when it's over. :)

[embolalia]

Just pre-scheduling it now! It always felt slightly unfinished, but I added a last paragraph and now I am done and happy with it! :D

[lanalucy]

I absolutely adore that Daniel rages at the universe on his daughter's behalf.

[embolalia]

It was interesting to write him this way, where he knows even more of the universe than Leoben, but is still a parent who doesn't want to see his daughter suffer.

[embolalia]

Thank you! It's years of head!canon in the making - and frustration with all the blanks the show left for us :)

[embolalia]

He was fascinating to write - almost an OC, there's so little canon about him. Thank you!

[newnumbertwo]

So very gorgeous. I love that Daniel feels so much as he sees Kara's body and her reaction to it, as she moves through the motions.

This is such a wonderful fix-it. That makes much more sense than what we were given.

Beautiful.

[embolalia]

Thank you! I finally made peace with some of my demons of canon :)