Lily's Eyes (rewritten lyrics)

Aug 01, 2007 19:27

I've been searching for songs from the Broadway musical "The Secret Garden" and the quest is proving very difficult. However, I found several different versions of a song called "Lily's Eyes". For those a bit fuzzy on the chracters of Secret Garden, Lily is Mary's aunt (Colin's mum and Lord Archibald Craven's wife).

Well, in the musical, Mary has Lily's eyes and both Archie and his brother (Dr. Neville Craven) notice this and have a whole song about it. Seems both men were in love with her. And it struck how, with a little creative re-writing, the song could very easily fit into the HP universe with Severus and Remus singing it.

This is assuming that (as in my little fan-girl universe) that Snape and Lily were lovers for a brief time and that Remus also held a torch for Lily but held it in check out of friendship for James.

NEVILLE/REMUS
Strangely quiet, but now the storm
Simply rests to strike again.
Standing, waiting, I think of her.
I think of her.

ARCHIBALD/SEVERUS:
Strange, this Harry, he leaves the room,
Yet remains, he lingers on.
Something stirs me to think of her.
I think of her.

NEVILLE/REMUS:
From death she casts her spell,
All night we hear her sighs,
And now a boy has come
Who has her eyes.

He has her eyes.
The boy has Lily's emerald eyes,
Those eyes that saw him happy long ago.
Those eyes that gave him life
And hope he'd never known.
How can he see the boy
And miss those emerald eyes?

ARCHIBALD/SEVERUS:
He has her eyes.
The boy has Lily's emerald eyes,
Those eyes that closed and left me all alone.
Those eyes I feel will never ever let me go!
How can I see this boy who has her emerald eyes?

In Lily's eyes a castle
This school seemed to be,
And I, the bravest knight, became,
My lady fair was she.

NEVILLE/REMUS:
He has her eyes.
He has my Lily's emerald eyes.
Those eyes that loved my brother-never me.
Those eyes that never saw me,
Never knew I longed
To hold her close,
To live at last in Lily's Eyes!

ARCHIBALD/SEVERUS:
Imagine me, a lover!

NEVILLE/REMUS:
I longed for the day
She'd turn and see me standing there.

NEVILLE/REMUS:
Would God have let her stay
He has her eyes!
He has Lily's emerald eyes
Those eyes that first I loved so!

ARCHIBALD/SEVERUS: (In counterpoint with above)
Would God have let her stay!
He has her eyes.
My Lily's hazel eyes.
Those eyes that saw me happy long ago.

BOTH:
How can
I now forget
That once I dared to be in love.
Alive and whole
In Lily's eyes,
In Lily's eyes!

Yeah, it so works. I may be forced to write a fic about this in the near future. ;) Here, someone twist my arm a little.
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