Title: It‘s Always Open Season On Princesses Part 17
Spoilers: Through S2
Word Count: 6082
Rating: R (for language)
Disclaimer: I guess I own Sergio? Maybe? But none of the rest of it.
AN: Whew! Holy cow you guys. We‘ve arrived at chapter seventeen. This chapter is going out to
fangirl_101 , who quite randomly requested several weeks ago in the ’Ficcy Friday’
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I hope you like Jeff Davis so it's an added bonus, if not;asohfsakjfdhas you need to love him like I do.
Anyways, I'm sorry for not reviewing previously I just finally got my computer back, and while I tried to stay up-to-date on my phone I couldn't review from it.
So I'm in love with your writing, I really am. And I love this story, the way you weave in all these cool references, your stunning imagery, I thoroughly enjoyed the picture you painted here, and with Rome. And not to mention that you're dead on with the characters. Not to mention, I love gay Rich. I actually came to like Rich recently, I had hated him before, but now I find his awesomeness. Though he scares me, it doesn't matter if he's seriously that nice or a crazy killer, he's just scary, but I love it.
And I was surprised by the Sergio/Rich which I think you'll be about. But it wasn't out of nowhere, and I get that. I love where you're taking these characters, and the development in this chapter, just made me squee. Loser Jeff, made me feel for him. But he was wrong, I do like nerdy boys, I would have been on that like peanut butter on Jelly.
Oh and Annie and her vodka filled mother. The backstory for all of these. Just, great, just great.
And the way you wrote the kiss was perfect, not out of place, I could see it happening at this point of the story. It didn't feel forced or anything. And Annie shutting the door in Jeff's face? Awesome.
Thank you for the Troy/Britta development, I ship them so much. I'm afraid if I ship them anymore I'll somehow sink them.
So overall:
And I only wish these updates keep coming out as fast as they do. If not I'll understand.
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You're back! I was wondering what had happened to you!
I'm so very happy that you like Rich. I love him as a character so much and he seems to be a fandom pariah. I would be equally happy to find out he is genuine or finding out that he has been killing co-eds for ten years. It diesn't even matter to me.
I'm so happy that the kiss didn't feel forced. I didn't plan on putting it there, but I kind of felt like they needed some sort of release from all the bad mojo I've been foisting upon them.
Thanks for reading and for the gifs! I plan to update again early next week.
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