An opinion =3

[liralicia]

Hi everyone!!!
I just made a pic for mi sister, but I'm not sure if it's ok... normally I only notice mistakes once I've already colored the thing and can't fix it anymore =(
Since this one is a present I really want it to look great, so please, if you have a minute, comments are really apreciated!! ♥

A link to my DA

Thanks in advance!! :3

Comments

[angelicmurmur]

THIS IS SO PRETTY! Okay, mistakes I've noticed [Be warned, I have a tendency to critique every little tiny thing, it means nothing, just trying to help you in your quest for perfection]:
Ed is only wearing a glove on one hand?
Ed's right hand looks kinda small?
I think his eyebrows are too thick, it just makes it look a little strange.
zomg I LOVE Al's expression!
And the kitty!
And that cool position of Al's right hand!
Okay, sorry *coughcough* crit. right. crit. um.
Al's waist is too small. Make it just the tiiiiniest bit wider (most like towards our left and his right).
That's all I can really think of. This is the prettiest elricesty picture evar!!

[jlarinda]

Don't you think the hands and waist looking small would be fixed just by making their heads smaller? I noticed their heads looked too big for the bodies...

I think you're right about the eyebrows. Mainly the left one, the part of the...frown? (Argh it's so difficult to translate stuff like that! Damn you, Spanish!) I mean like the part that goes to the center x_x

Btw, squee, Mulder xD

[liralicia]

I speak spanish!!!! x3

[jlarinda]

Agh, you should've told me xDDDDD

Quise decir la parte que apunta hacia adentro de la ceja...
:p

[kath_mandu]

I cannot even express how kawaii this picture is! You are such a terrific artist. Thanks so much for sharing this! BTW, you're icon is extremely adorable as well... ;^)

[liralicia]

Thanks so much x3 ~~♥ (the icon's not mine, though... it's credited on my icons page if you want to check =3)

[koulover]

It's so lovely <3
All mistakes I noticed were from body proportion and they have been mentioned above already :3
You really gotta to scan the colored version if you happen to make it :D

[liralicia]

Yeah... yo y mis monos cabezones, menos mal que pregunté antes de pintar xD
Si queda decente, prometo escanearlo =3

[arivess]

I think Ed's braid looks a bit strange. It's starting a bit too high, and it's too straight. I'd think it should dip a little between Ed's head and Al's hands. ^^

Also, it'd be better if you were to enlargen the hands, rather than making the heads smaller, since the hands are a bit small in proportion to the body, too. Especially Ed's writing hand, since it's coming out at the viewer.

The kitty's back looks slightly strange too. I'm not so familiar with cat anatomy, so don't take my word for it, but I think it should be rounded out a little more? (Not sure, though. You might wanna look up photos.)

But anyway, that's a beautiful picture! ^_^

[melisen]

Awww~ this is such a adorable picture! ^__^ <3

I love Al's cheerful expression as he braids Ed's hair. Ed doesn't seem to like it too much because he's being distracted from his work but you know he does. XD ::chuckles::

As for the mistakes I noticed, they've been covered already above by Ari-chan who I agree with. ^^