An opinion =3

[liralicia]

Hi everyone!!!
I just made a pic for mi sister, but I'm not sure if it's ok... normally I only notice mistakes once I've already colored the thing and can't fix it anymore =(
Since this one is a present I really want it to look great, so please, if you have a minute, comments are really apreciated!! ♥

A link to my DA

Thanks in advance!! :3

Comments

[angelicmurmur]

THIS IS SO PRETTY! Okay, mistakes I've noticed [Be warned, I have a tendency to critique every little tiny thing, it means nothing, just trying to help you in your quest for perfection]:
Ed is only wearing a glove on one hand?
Ed's right hand looks kinda small?
I think his eyebrows are too thick, it just makes it look a little strange.
zomg I LOVE Al's expression!
And the kitty!
And that cool position of Al's right hand!
Okay, sorry *coughcough* crit. right. crit. um.
Al's waist is too small. Make it just the tiiiiniest bit wider (most like towards our left and his right).
That's all I can really think of. This is the prettiest elricesty picture evar!!

[jlarinda]

Don't you think the hands and waist looking small would be fixed just by making their heads smaller? I noticed their heads looked too big for the bodies...

I think you're right about the eyebrows. Mainly the left one, the part of the...frown? (Argh it's so difficult to translate stuff like that! Damn you, Spanish!) I mean like the part that goes to the center x_x

Btw, squee, Mulder xD

[liralicia]

I speak spanish!!!! x3

[jlarinda]

Agh, you should've told me xDDDDD

Quise decir la parte que apunta hacia adentro de la ceja...
:p

[liralicia]

Las cejas se las arreglo siempre cuanto pinto... no sé, complejo de cejona, hago monos cejones xD
Ahí veré si se arreglan cuando los des-cabezone, gracias por el comentario x3 ♥

[angelicmurmur]

No! Don't touch the heads! The heads are PRETTY!!!!1

[liralicia]

xDDDD
Ok, then I guess I'll have to make the bodies bigger =3

[liralicia]

Wow, thanks so much!! =O ♥
The one glove thing was on purpose... a little pun for my sister who can't write with her gloves on =P
You're probably right about the hands size and Al's waist... must go and fix x(
You're the best!!!!

[angelicmurmur]

Not a problem! Glad you weren't offended or anything! XD

[liralicia]

Nopes... that's what I was asking for indeed :3
I knew something was VERY wrong with them, but couldn't find out what it was by myself ^^;