Hand in Hand; Part 3

[armor_of_guilt]

Sorry for the late update ^^;; With Easter coming up and tests before spring break I didn't have much time to work on the story and then when I did have time, there was that damned writers' block. Plus, this chapter was a little more difficult to write. I'm used to having interactions between Ed and Al, but now I have to add more people and it was

Comments

[box_of_doom]

Awww.... CUUUUTE!!!

Al hyperventalating over Ed... he would do that too... *hugs him*

I really do love the way you're writing the brothers. It's very in character and almost makes me believe they're real. You're really doing a wonderful job, and I can't wait to see the next installment. (If it's late, that's even better, 'cause that means it'll be out after I'm done exams. :P) ^_^

[armor_of_guilt]

Yesh, I love writing Al all frantic-like, he seems to act that way in the anime a lot, but he's in armor so it's kinda different.

-hugs- Thank you! It makes me very happy you think so! ^w^

[melisen]

Awwww...poor Al. He's having so many feelings and sensations all at once. He loves Ed but he's too scared to tell him, he wants Ed to be happy with his new promotion but doesn't want to separated from him...

I don't blame Al for hyperventalating over Ed like that.

At least Ed found a solution so Al could be with him while he did his work. I wonder how things are going to go from there...

I'll just have to wait and see in the next chapter of this captivating story, won't I? ^^

[armor_of_guilt]

Ne, I don't either. It's quite easy to hyperventilate over Ed ^^ must be even easier seeing that Al has to spend almost all his time with his nii-san.

And of course you need to wait for the next installment for more... well... I'm not sure exactly, but whatever it is it will be there!

Thank you for the review!

[armor_of_guilt]

The condition... is that...

Mustang needs to shave his head and eat a bowl of chili while singing his ABCs in the Fuhrer's office.

I'm kidding ^^ You'll just have to wait and see! Tee hee

[armor_of_guilt]

Mwahahaha <

[arivess]

Aww... *pets Al* Poor sweetie.

Something happened to your italics, though. It makes it a little distracting. ^^;

Anyway, I'm looking forward to more of this. ^^

[armor_of_guilt]

Poor, little, confused Al... hopefully things will get better for him.

And I noticed that... it's really annoying! I feel like ripping my hair out everytime I look at this chapter T.T Stupid italics...

Thanks for reviewing! (I can't spell today... I had to rewrite that three times o.O;; )

[chibi_nyo]

I just LOVE this fic! :D And this chapter was soo cute! >w<

[armor_of_guilt]

Aw! -hugs- Thank you very much!! I'm glad you thought so =^w^=