Fic: Stepping Sideways: Pete's World 1/10

Nov 13, 2015 07:39

So, I've had these stories planned out forever. And as I - miracle of miracles! - remembered what it was luckweaver's birthday (OK, she happened to mention it in passing and I was like 'OMG think of something!'), I decided to see if any of them were actually fit for posting. And this one came the closest. Probably 10 chapters altogether, but short chapters ( Read more... )

stepping sideways, my fic, not the last

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luckweaver November 13 2015, 15:04:05 UTC
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Stepping Sideways! You spoil me, dear. And I want more, I want it now. Well I can be reasonable I suppose. ...........Grabby hands.

I love how you write Rose and the Meta Crisis 10. Very nice little family arrangement, and I especially like how you address that this 10 isn't human, or Time Lord, he just sort of is. And that works better for Rose than a human husband, because she's not that kind of woman anymore, she doesn't want that kind of thing ( ... )

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elisi November 13 2015, 15:21:06 UTC
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Stepping Sideways!
YAY YOU LIKE IT!

You spoil me, dear.
And quite right too.

And I want more, I want it now. Well I can be reasonable I suppose. ...........Grabby hands.
Maybe another chapter tonight?

I love how you write Rose and the Meta Crisis 10.
I have written them quite often now, and find them very easy to write by now. :)

Very nice little family arrangement, and I especially like how you address that this 10 isn't human, or Time Lord, he just sort of is. And that works better for Rose than a human husband, because she's not that kind of woman anymore, she doesn't want that kind of thing.
I find them rather interesting. Especially love your 'he just sort of is because that's it, exactly. But there is also tension because it’s a ‘normal’ relationship and they have to make it work - there’s nowhere to run to.

It's also really neat that Rose is the one who, despite her nervousness at the situation, is happiest to meet another Time Lord. Though, I suppose this Rose never got anywhere near the ( ... )

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ragnarok_08 November 13 2015, 16:11:22 UTC
I really loved reading this, and this was very well-written :)

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elisi November 13 2015, 16:23:19 UTC
Thank you! The prose is... pretty pared down, I guess, but that's what you get for dusting stuff off and trying to knock it into shape. :)

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