The Silly Pancake (another story by the Cherub, age 7)

[elisi]

Spurred on by last's night success, my youngest has created another story. Hopefully you can follow it, I've not really edited it.

The Silly PancakeOne day it was Pancake Day and the Dad of the familiy made llllllllllloooooooooottttttttttssssssssss of pancakes and everybody had about 4 or 5 each but there was one

Comments

[eilowyn]

Yes, I can see why you call her the cherub! So adorable!

[elisi]

The Cherub: "I know that! Goodbye."

(She is not very familiar with humility...)

[the_royal_anna]

Oh no! A tragedy. I was hoping when the pancake escaped he might have had a brief series of adventures with the runaway sausage, but it was not to be. Such a sad death! But no worse than being eaten I suppose.

Next time I go bowling I am going to take a pancake, in the hope that the ball will be less likely to roll off into the gutters.

[elisi]

The Cherub: "OK, but make sure you don't get thrown out! Thank you for saying that. Goodbye."

[a_phoenixdragon]

*Cackles with Joy and Delight*

That...was EPIC!!

*grins*

[elisi]

The Cherub: "Thank you ever so much for saying it is good, by saying Joy and Delight!"

[a_phoenixdragon]

Aww, bless her! It was an awesome fic!

[elisi]

The Cherub: "Thanks ever so much! You really are kind."

[mengu]

This one already understands the importance of a death at the end.

[elisi]

The Cherub: "Why would you say that it's important to have a death at the end?"

[mengu]

Oh, otherwise we'd only have comedies.

[elisi]

The Cherub: "OK... That's kinda weird..."

(She doesn't really understand what you mean. I'm going to try my best to explain it.)

[geekslave]

Well, that took an unexpectedly tragic turn. LOL. Your cherub already is learning about adding twists to stories. Very cool.

Stacey

[elisi]

The Cherub: "Thanks for saying I'm very cool. And I did not learn that at school!"