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elisa_trapt

The First Time, Chapter 14

Sep 16, 2010 20:11

Title: The First Time
Rating: R
A/N: I am so stuffed right now, I'm surprised I have the strength to post this. But what a tasty way to go - death by BBQ pulled pork. Om nom nom. *clears throat* Anyway. Okay, everyone, deep breaths. A few more chapters left, and then I promise to stop picking at the wound. You have my word. But for now, on with the ( Read more... )

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Comments 12

bsofthewest September 17 2010, 05:53:40 UTC

I have tears in my eyes....

elisa_trapt September 18 2010, 01:33:17 UTC

*hands you a tissue, puts an arm around you*

I know, it's okay. We'll have a good cry together. :(

swiftlyreloaded September 17 2010, 12:08:39 UTC

me too. (tears)

elisa_trapt September 18 2010, 01:35:04 UTC

*pulls out another tissue, puts other arm around you*

There, there. Let it all out. bsofthewest and I are having a good cry together. Join us, it's cathartic.

frogfrizz September 17 2010, 13:03:27 UTC

I'd like for Pepa to be happy, indeed. But in so many ways, I keep wishing that Silvia would come back.

I really love the way that Pepa seeks Don Lorenzo out more than anyone else. I should think that Don Lorenzo's relationship to his daughter-in-law gets more and more father-like. Thanks so much for sharing this with us. It's been a painful journey but in a world without the Peliroja, life goes on still.

elisa_trapt September 18 2010, 01:39:27 UTC

I think we'd ALL love for Silvia to return. But alas....

I think one of the most fabulous things to come out of Pepa/Silvia was the relationship b/w Pepa and DL, and how he really came to think of her as his daughter. There's no doubt in my mind that they would have turned to each other for comfort and support with Silvia gone. They would have most definitely taken care of each other.

lenageek September 17 2010, 18:27:04 UTC

Me three! Tears!

elisa_trapt September 18 2010, 01:36:45 UTC

*runs out of arms to give you a tissue or put around you*

Please help yourself to those tissue, lena, and then feel free to join the group cry/hug over here. We're all having a moment.

leigh57 September 17 2010, 18:59:38 UTC

So as I just told you in my email, I can't keep up with life, but I truly am enjoying this story even though it's kind of breaking my heart. I can only imagine what it's doing to those who associate real people with the characters you're drawing so well here. I really love the entire conversation between Don Lorenzo and Pepa about what Silvia would want, and Pepa's genuine fear that being happy is some sort of betrayal. It's all so human. Keep it coming!

elisa_trapt September 18 2010, 01:51:17 UTC

Thank you so much! And, hey, I can't keep up with life either half the time, so no worries.

Yeah, I seem to be very good at making people cry around here. They were really such an awesome couple, Silvia's death was just WRENCHING, and it's difficult to imagine Pepa w/ anyone else. But I really wouldn't want her to live forever alone and in sadness either. It's just such a process for her, and every time there's a step forward, her first instinct is to RUN. Ay, poor Pepa. Thanks God her FIL is around to provide some sort of anchor.

Also, on a completely unrelated note, Renee seems awfully happy to see one Mr. Jack Bauer right there. Big, ol' smile. :) But hell, I'd give Batman!Jack a big squeeze too.