Above the Haze (Part 2)

Jan 23, 2010 01:45

Title: Above the Haze
Pairing: Shige/Yamapi
Rating: NC-17

Part 2 )

c: yamapi, c: shige, c: koyama, #one-shot, p: shige/yamapi, au, r: nc-17

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fairy_illusions January 23 2010, 07:02:23 UTC
FIRST.

And reserving a spot for Gem~

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fairy_illusions January 23 2010, 08:07:22 UTC
WHERE THE HECK DO I START QUOTING ( ... )

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sanjihan January 23 2010, 08:15:05 UTC
*pleased* I like to tease you but you have to admit that you deserve it. XD I'm so glad you ended up liking it anyway. ;) I had a lot of fun writing it amidst the pain (heh) and working it all out was difficult but worth it. :D I've never read pilot!ShigePi either but YES THEY WOULD BE HOT PILOTS. Hot anything, really.

THANK YOU! *hugs* And get on msn sometime. NOW WHO'S THE TEASE?

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fairy_illusions January 23 2010, 08:22:49 UTC
I'm online, but where are YOU?

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vinyaromeniel January 23 2010, 07:19:26 UTC
OMG you wrote the ShigePi :D I think I love you very much right now (okay honestly I loved you before already lol)

Coming back when I read this :D *glomps

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fairy_illusions January 23 2010, 08:08:33 UTC
You're AWAKE? What time is it over there right now? o.O?

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vinyaromeniel January 23 2010, 23:39:39 UTC
I was woke up at 7:45 today because I went to meet zazie and mitsubachi_san xD So when I commented it was like 8:15 or something haha

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vinyaromeniel January 24 2010, 01:24:04 UTC
Finally I'm back with commenting.

And apart from agreeing to everything fairy said I only have this for you:
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major key smash. It was awesome and beautiful and heart wrenching and OMG YOU WROTE SHIGEPI

And I always had to laugh at KoyaShige because they are awesome together and Koyama's always like "You know I love you and I'm there for you.. BUT NO SEX!!!!!" haha

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drphoenix January 23 2010, 07:36:28 UTC
I am terrible at this commenting thing, but this has to be one of the best and most beautiful things I've read in a long time. <3 Thank you so much for sharing; it was gorgeous.

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sanjihan January 23 2010, 07:50:43 UTC
:D :D I don't know about you but I think this is a GREAT comment! I'm so glad to see that you liked it and thank you so much for commenting. :D I was a bit nervous about it (the fic). XD

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budiamond January 23 2010, 09:39:44 UTC
OMG YOU FINISHED IT.
COMMENTING TOMORROW (or Monday, because tomorrow is the staff lunch and I will be distracted) WHEN MY BRAIN ISN'T MUSH.

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sanjihan January 23 2010, 16:55:11 UTC
I DID!!! But I forgot to be all CAIT SAVED ME FROM DELETING IMPORTANT PART but you know I love you for that, right? XD

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OH LOOK, IT'S A CAIT. budiamond February 8 2010, 00:17:43 UTC
What? I'm late? What? :D Surely not.
You know my comments are always huge and amazing, and you love me. Thus, you forgive me. C:

Since that day, he had been striving toward his literally invisible goal of reaching the sky again
I love how your Shige is so motivated and focused ♥ Right from the start. XD

an unprecedented peace in the world and, despite the slow burn of their planet, there was an overarching sense of calm
That is quite an interesting way of thinking. It evokes the weirdest sort of image/feeling, but I think I like it better than the “Earth is dying…. Let’s all kill each other!” mentality. XD

He’d taken every advanced math, science, and geography course he could get into
OF COURSE HE DID. Oh Shige.

Shige hung his head as he left, sure he had blown it. There hadn’t been any more questions. There should have been more and there weren’t. He walked slowly, dejectedly, toward the bike rack. And when he got home, he ignored his mother’s questions, sank down onto his bed and cried.OH GOD SHIGE BABY. *Holds him* I know how ( ... )

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C: budiamond February 8 2010, 00:19:24 UTC
“I thought you were Yamashita.”
Koyama’s eyebrow quirked and he grinned at his best friend. “Well, that explains quite a bit, then.”
LOL KOYAMA YOU FUCKNUT. Everyone in this is so mean to Shige, hahaha, I love them. :D

It all came to a head one day after a particularly painful evening session in his room where Shige couldn’t even look at the man and flinched whenever Yamashita’s arm brushed his as he pointed something out.
Oh god, this whole scene, the UST, ahdjaghrj;agarj;g TARAAAAAA. I love you. :D

“… You slept with him didn’t you?” Koyama practically crowed.
Hehehe, Koyama. :D He is somehow so pleased with himself, even though he hasn’t actually done anything. XD;

4Shige felt an overwhelming urge to kiss her. Until he realized that maybe she was asking for the same reason he wanted to know.
Ohhh Shige. :D Oh Shige. You and your jealousy. Your founded jealousy, but still. XD

“He loved flying. Every other story he told was about it. He was so proud the day I made it into the flight academy. My father was afraid of heights,” he ( ... )

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jtriskell January 23 2010, 09:52:54 UTC
sanjihan January 23 2010, 17:04:26 UTC
I'm glad! Thank you. :D

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