Above the Haze (Part 2)

Jan 23, 2010 01:45

Title: Above the Haze
Pairing: Shige/Yamapi
Rating: NC-17

Part 2 )

c: yamapi, c: shige, c: koyama, #one-shot, p: shige/yamapi, au, r: nc-17

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budiamond January 23 2010, 09:39:44 UTC
OMG YOU FINISHED IT.
COMMENTING TOMORROW (or Monday, because tomorrow is the staff lunch and I will be distracted) WHEN MY BRAIN ISN'T MUSH.

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sanjihan January 23 2010, 16:55:11 UTC
I DID!!! But I forgot to be all CAIT SAVED ME FROM DELETING IMPORTANT PART but you know I love you for that, right? XD

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OH LOOK, IT'S A CAIT. budiamond February 8 2010, 00:17:43 UTC
What? I'm late? What? :D Surely not.
You know my comments are always huge and amazing, and you love me. Thus, you forgive me. C:

Since that day, he had been striving toward his literally invisible goal of reaching the sky again
I love how your Shige is so motivated and focused ♥ Right from the start. XD

an unprecedented peace in the world and, despite the slow burn of their planet, there was an overarching sense of calm
That is quite an interesting way of thinking. It evokes the weirdest sort of image/feeling, but I think I like it better than the “Earth is dying…. Let’s all kill each other!” mentality. XD

He’d taken every advanced math, science, and geography course he could get into
OF COURSE HE DID. Oh Shige.

Shige hung his head as he left, sure he had blown it. There hadn’t been any more questions. There should have been more and there weren’t. He walked slowly, dejectedly, toward the bike rack. And when he got home, he ignored his mother’s questions, sank down onto his bed and cried.OH GOD SHIGE BABY. *Holds him* I know how ( ... )

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C: budiamond February 8 2010, 00:19:24 UTC
“I thought you were Yamashita.”
Koyama’s eyebrow quirked and he grinned at his best friend. “Well, that explains quite a bit, then.”
LOL KOYAMA YOU FUCKNUT. Everyone in this is so mean to Shige, hahaha, I love them. :D

It all came to a head one day after a particularly painful evening session in his room where Shige couldn’t even look at the man and flinched whenever Yamashita’s arm brushed his as he pointed something out.
Oh god, this whole scene, the UST, ahdjaghrj;agarj;g TARAAAAAA. I love you. :D

“… You slept with him didn’t you?” Koyama practically crowed.
Hehehe, Koyama. :D He is somehow so pleased with himself, even though he hasn’t actually done anything. XD;

4Shige felt an overwhelming urge to kiss her. Until he realized that maybe she was asking for the same reason he wanted to know.
Ohhh Shige. :D Oh Shige. You and your jealousy. Your founded jealousy, but still. XD

“He loved flying. Every other story he told was about it. He was so proud the day I made it into the flight academy. My father was afraid of heights,” he ( ... )

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Re: C: sanjihan February 8 2010, 03:46:03 UTC
...You are totally forgiven (not that I was mad in the first place but hey.)

I want your powers of description, Tara. D: Please share them with meee.
I was rather proud of that line myself. XD You have wonderful powers of description already, don't you worry.

The squiggle lines, quite thankfully, did not leave the Word docu. XD Damn them.

alksdjfasr I love that you loved my Koyama so much because obviously I fail at hiding my bias AT ALL and those were my favorite parts. XD

AHFKALLJRLEG YOU AND THAT WORD. XD It’s starting to get to me like it gets to you. .___.; Wah.
FEEL MY LOVE!!!! It totally gets me every time.

And I feel totally justified in making Pi a bitch sometimes because he totally is every now and then.

TARA. You do realize this is how you treat me, may I just say?
All good fiction has its basis irl. XD XD XD What can I say, you inspire me. ;)

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